OH MY GOD THAT WAS GREAT! I've never laughed so hard in my LIFE!
...Okay, so let me clarify. I just read this whole story from top to bottom; I didn't just read the last chapter. Okay, all good :)
Anyhoo, back to the review! The chapter I am reffering to when I say, "I've never laughed so hard in my LIFE!"" is Little Kagome and the Big Bully (the part where Satori got her ass handed to her). That, I must say, is your best chapter in terms of hilarity!
I really enjoy the whole connected-yet-spaced-thing (does that make sense? What I mean is how you didn't make each set of interconnected stories ONE story. That is, The Playground Turns isn't a story by itself--it's interrupted by "The Author" and whatever other drabble you can think of. It heightens the anticipation :])
If it seems like I'm more commenting on "The Playground Turns", You would be right--it's my FAVORITE! I LOVE little Sesshoumaru and Kagome! I really hope to see them again soon--along with Sesshoumaru's mother (I wonder how it would go if she suddenly showed up on the playground? *laughs*). I also love how you intertwine his father into the whole thing--I love the fact that I get to hear his thought on the matter from time to time!
My second favorite one is definetly "It's Disgusting!" I could practically see Kagome screaming at Sesshoumaru and I could feel her frustration--it made me laugh--the poor, poor girl! Sesshoumaru's response was HILARIOUS--"we will not be leaving before morning... and do not come looking for us for any reason.” PRICELESS! I hope to see from this as well (pretty please with a HUUUGE cherry on top :])
Next is what I have come to dub "The Flower Conversation". I had no IDEA flowers meant so much! It so sad to me, but hopeful because Kagome's moving on :)
I'm going to stop now because I know that if I continue, this review will end up about two pages long *laughs* That's how AWESOME your stories are!
Hope to read from you again soon and hoping you feel better,
N.Y
First off I hope you're feeling better! Secondly OMG I'm dying of cuteness!! This was the cutest chapter ever! Toga's amusement at the children's antics makes me smile and laugh! But Sesshoumaru's kissing his little Miko Bride was heart meltingly beautiful!
Manatee (Chapter 13) - Fri 16 Dec 2011
Oh my gosh I totally cried reading that! Poor thing!
Noooo!!! That was sooo cute! I told you that drugs are a good thing at times. They open your mind man...LOL!!
I hope you the best on adjusting to the new pain medications. I will be patiently waiting for your updates, so take your time. ( :
This chapter was so....CUTE! Thanks for writing it.
*dies from cyoot overload*
Oh jeebus, that was just....I do love how you give Touga;s perspective. It makes it all the funnier, and I lovelovelove this chapter sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.
omfg that made me laugh so much =x his bride! hahahaha so cute!, and wow, pounding inuyasha >:3 that's just great!
Cathryn (Chapter 34) - Wed 14 Dec 2011
AWWWWW!!!!
TKE (Chapter 34) - Wed 14 Dec 2011
awwww so cute!!
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