Great story, please update soon.

wow a younger Sesshomaru, such a great idea! Inuyasha is bound to like it LOL

LMAO.....loved the end!!!!

;_; that was sheer torture. you ended the chapter there.  I really like your story, keep up the good work.

i can't wait for the next chapter. love it.

He is halfway there when he is grown, now how is he going to achieve her heart as a youngster!

I still love that line, "but having a creepy white kids effect." Nice to see your story here on Dokuga. Sharing any others?

uhm chapter 4 is repeated twice in the same chapter just letting you know other than that keepup the great work i really enjoyed reading you story ^_^

Um o.o just letting you know that you double posted the story. :D totally loving it btw ;)

He needs to fall in love, undying love, maybe Kagome could be the one?

I think its so cute that he got jealous of Shippo and Rin and how he wanted to cuddle with Kagome too.

After I read this chapter I went to FFN & got the whole thing, I'm enjoying it but it does have some repeated goofs, your (belonging to you) instead of you're (a contraction of you are), I don't think you have a single instance where your is appropriate. Also unless you're talking about time then isn't the word you want it's than, than is the common usage. Also than is ratio related, then is time related. You could get a better explanation by googling for the difference & how to use the 2. Other than those 2 things & a few misspelled words here & there that's pretty much all I saw.