Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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henandchicks (Chapter 212) - Sun 11 Mar 2012

Ohh!  Someone get me some ice water because that was hot!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 213) - Sun 11 Mar 2012

Some nice Sess/Kag smutty goodness. Onward!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 212) - Sun 11 Mar 2012

Ooooo, some Sess/Kag love after he has some explaining to do. He can't get away with what he did scot-free. He has some explaining to do while Inuyasha has a lot of thinking to do. I really feel bad for him despite everything that happened. Onward!


randomfan17 (Chapter 211) - Fri 09 Mar 2012

Sigh of relief in the room. So glad he did what i expected, otherwise i would have had to stop liking him. I feel sorry for both of them, I just hope it doesn't break them apart forever because of it. Maybe she'll regain some sanity after thinking it over. Can't wait to see what happens next!


wickedone43 (Chapter 211) - Fri 09 Mar 2012

This amazing literature! Yes, literature!

Everytime you update, I start the whole thing over again.  It is that good!  It is long, oh so long but so worth the time.

Please continue to entertain us with your skilled writings.  I look forward to your next update.

 

Thank you! :)


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 211) - Fri 09 Mar 2012

It was obvious that Sesshomaru was not going to get away with doing what he did scot-free. He definitely has some 'splainin to do. Onward!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 211) - Fri 09 Mar 2012

VERY violent! but rather awesome of him! she better love him for that >:3


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 210) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

she's going to be really violent about this later!


randomfan17 (Chapter 209) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

I think he's going to reject her. He may be a womanizer but he still loves her and hopefully knows that taking advantage of her in this situation would be wrong. In the case that i'm wrong however and he acts like an insensitive jerk i will forever curse him as a low down scum dog. Loved the chapters though, i think its exactly what they would do to inuyasha in this situation.


Aubrey Simone (Chapter 208) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

I must admit that I've been guilty of stalking, er, I mean, reading this fic without reviewing, but I couldn't hold out any more, so, here goes. 

I remember reading this some time ago, but I might have stopped, or forgotten to put it on my favorites list, but either way, I read the first handful of chapters and then didn't read anymore until recently; the Valentine's Day DDN is when I noticed it again, because you were posting in chat and I couldn't help but marvel at your entries. So I came and played catch-up, and then I just couldn't stop reading. I feel a little disappointed now, as a matter of fact, because I have to wait between chapters when there isn't a DDN or anything like that. 

You have a knack for storytelling, that much is absolutely certain. It's very easy to get caught up in this story, and out of all the stories I've ever read, you're the only one who portrayed Sango in such a riveting way; these past few chapters, she's been absolutely vicious, and I can't tell you how refreshing it is to see her as Sango the Exterminator instead of just Sango the Sister. 

All of your characterizations are amazing, as a matter of fact, and that makes it that much easier to love this story.

Anyway, I'll stop gushing! Awesome job so far, and I can't wait to see where you take us next! 

~Aubrey

p.s. - boy am I glad for IDDNs! More chapters to read! 


 


Bookwrm150 (Chapter 209) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

I want to guess! 1) they get interupted! 2) Miroku pulls some self restraint and doens't have sex with her but either a) comforts her or b) tells her that she's not in her right mind but would love to continue in a few days.

 

Those are my guesses! :D


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 209) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

he's going to be a gentle men and tell her to come bcl when she's not upset? that or he's going to impregnate her =x


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 208) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

Wow, looks like things have taken a turn for the worse for the foolish hanyou. Now there's no longer an Inu-tachi to speak of and now Inuyasha's officially on his own. Onward!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 208) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

awe :\ i think part of me for gets that this is all only been a few days max


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 207) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

Now I really feel bad for Sango. But I understand how she feels. Onward!


Aurora Antheia Raine (Chapter 207) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

WELL. I say Inuyasha got what he deserved! Goooooo Sango! NOW, as much as I love seeing Inuyasha get beat up for his stupidity... Let's see more of that awesome smut. XP LOL (You knew I was gonna do it! Don't deny it! lol)


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 207) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

YESH!!!  Sleepies = GOOD!  Makes dear authoress' brain work better and come up with more goodness for greedy readers, like ME!!  I love the way you portrayed Sango's fury, all the pent-up emotions and all the hurt that needed to come out.  And, even if it was a slightly rotten thing to say, I'm glad Miroku stopped her... he was right.  Kags, despite all Inu's treachery, would never want his death on Sango's head.  I know it's been a while since I've reviewed, so I'm taking a minute now to remind you of how much I love your writing, and to thank you for all your hard work (and sleeplessness) in feeding people like me!!

:D

~~me~~


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 207) - Thu 08 Mar 2012

oh! :3 *feels pleased* now... if we could only get Rin... >:3


Treece (Chapter 207) - Wed 07 Mar 2012

I more than owe you this review.  I didn't know what to expect

when I first started reading this.  Now that I've caught up, if I DID

know, this story would have exceeded anything great I could have come up with.

Awesome, creative, rich, brilliant, psychologically dead-on, and the writing

crisp, precise while retaining it's visual clarity.  This is a darned fine story.  Can't wait

to see where it goes and how it ends--though I'm loath for it to end!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 206) - Sun 04 Mar 2012

Having manacles at his wrists and ankles are not helping, but Inuyasha deserved to have his butt handed to him. Hopefully, he's still alive. Poor Sango. Onward!


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