| Wow. Really interesting plot twist! I didn't see it coming...Kagome wouldn't happen to be Midoriko, would she? I can see that happening in your story, Kagome getting pulled back into time just to find out she shaped the future for everyone! Ha, I wonder what's going to happen next? I really want to know who those three voices in the first chapter were!! Grrr, it's frustrating me! Well, you have me hooked, keep up the good work!
Aly (Chapter 3) - Mon 01 Sep 2008
| I reallly liked it!! But I have a question: did I miss something, or do we know what a `green child` is ...
K,T,M (Chapter 3) - Sun 31 Aug 2008
| O.O wow... hope you update soon XD
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 3) - Sun 31 Aug 2008
| I'm so glad that you've updated. And just out of curiosity, is the mark on her forehead the same mark that's on Midoriko? I mean, the only time that Kagome would have seen such a mark would have been in Midoriko's cave. That is the only thing that comes to mind when Kagome says that she's seen the mark once before. Anyways, I look forward to your next chappie. :P
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 2) - Sat 12 Jul 2008
| So I guess "Green Child" is referring to Kagome? Was she sent to a time when midoriko was alive? And how far back in time was she sent? I'm guess a few hundred if the goshinboku hasn't been planted yet. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read what happens next. :P
| Do itashimashite -bows-
Still intrigued, but the plot thickens. Midori, heh? lol. If that's not a loop! XD
Good work, keep on the good writing, and thank you for the chapter! Dewa mata
MoniQ (Chapter 2) - Fri 11 Jul 2008
| Im going to review on this site cuz A-ss-s wasnt being nice at the time at least i got to read it! anyways although it was short it was shocking!!!! SHOCKING i tell you, very well done and u used just the right amount of japanese words so as to not tick me off for not understanding, Cannot wait till the next chapter!
MONIQ
MoniQ (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jul 2008
| i forgot to add this in my comment but, Nice remake of the Clip on Youtube!
| hmmm....I got a wink.....I'm definately gettin a lil suspicious.
^.^
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
asian_obsessed girl XD (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Jun 2008
| I like it.......you have a good plot.I hope you update soon......can't wait for the next chapter......yay ^.^
I lik_e pie * (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Jun 2008
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I like pie *_^ (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Jun 2008
| Hope you update soon.....love your plot XD
I lik_e pie * (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Jun 2008
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| Your writing is good, and you set an intriguing story, I feel... Very interrested. ^_^
The idea of a trailer on youtube is good too lol, and the suspense is even thicker.
Please, write more!!! ;)
dewa mata
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