you should definately add a little more to the store you have a good writing talent I hope you continue to write

It is another good chapter i can not wait until i read the next four. i have a feeling it is going to be one of the better stories i will read. Post soon please!!!!!! Chaos

Im pretty sure that was one of the best one shots i have ever had the pleasure of reading. thank you. other than a few spelling errors it was a fantastic fic. Chaos

very good story, i loved it. it went so well with sesshomaru and kagome in it. keep up the good work

I enjoyed it. Kag and Sess always make a good story, all of your stories are good. Just a suggestion make this a short story. Just to tie up the loose ends. Anywa great job and keep it up.

I really enjoyed this story! I do hope there will be more soon! You did a great job! ^__^ -KB

This is beautiful hon.With minor tweaks here and there it could be divine.Pick up your tooshie and get a you know what.

You did quite well with this story, and there isn't really a lot you need to work on. I would also recommend a beta-reader. The only things that I really noticed were some grammatical errors, incorrect phrasing, and run-on sentences. Easily fixed. Great job, and I hope that you continue this storyline!

This is an awsome story!The lemon scean was great!I really hope you write more!

I'm looking forward to the rest of this story! Other than the occasional spelling-type error, your story is very wonderfully done.

Wow.... This was really good I hope you plan to continue.

I love this story. I also read your stories on fanfiction.net, you are officially my favorate author. I love Mulon. It the best disney movie ever! Anyway, I cant wate for the up-date,:)

I am a very big fan of your works. This story was a marvelous beginning. You didn't drag out the unnecessary and it got right to the point. As well, your sex scenes are lovely

This is a awesome piece, i think your descriptions are great you gave real insight to what they both were feeling. great detail

As always, I really enjoy your writing! I feel you could definitely benefit from a beta reader, I know I have. There were a couple spelling and grammatical errors that I found, but that definitely didn't take away from the amazing job you did! Keep up the fantastic work; I look forward to reading more of your stories :)