Your story was beautiful and believable. Thank you for sharing such a treasure.
Completely accidental but the heat got turned way up on the last chapter with Lisa Loeb's Do you sleep? Still one of my favorites.
Great story though I wanted some more smut ;D
The concept of Kami is wierd to me as Kamis are suposed to be so glorious that not all would be able to handle seeing them in person. Further, it's weird how a simple spell/non-kami can hide Kagome from Kami's.
CHaracters need more descriptions to them appearance-wise.
Need more understandable dog-logic and how the cardinal lodships politics work.
The choosing of the mate is confusing as well.
Love this story. It is definitely one of my favorites. I love the characters especially Kagome. The story was well written. Thank you for sharing your work.
I'm finally leaving a review after reading this story years ago, the story was great and I enjoyed it.
Ohh, this was lovely! Thank you for this wonderful trip, it was truly a joy.
This story was amazing to read, it had me on the edge of my seat for quite some time.
Selenay
YAY! Kagome is kick ass in this! woot!
I started reading Western Legacy then thought...I should probably read the prequel first to understand what was going on. So here I am! loving it already! thought i'm really upset at InuYasha.
That was a great story. I loved it. Thanks for writing a super fantastic story. It was awesome.
I'm pretty sure I have read this before on Fanfiction.net. but i still cant seem to get enough of this EPIC story. It is so well written, and ugh... if only i could find more fanfictions written like this. XD
I would just like to say that you are FANTASTIC. =] This was truely wonderful! Thank you for sharing this!
I'm not understanding how a 'kami' (a god if i'm not mistaken) can't find her...I mean...they're supposed to be all omniscient aren't they?
this is the longest story i have ever read and you made it woth it. thank you for it :) great story by the way, really enjoyed it but you shoud really double check your spelling. i was having trouble with the brown word. i guess you meant to type brow. thank you again for the story. ta ta :)
LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! One of my faveorites, can't wait read any of your stories. this story is well written and has a good plot and everything. :)
Fabulous story, well written, it was a joy to read. Characters were spot on, I loved the twists you threw in. Looking forward to reading more of your work! So keep it up! :)
Fabulous! A wonderful, imaginative read that had me hooked from the very beginning. Great detail, my attention was constantly captivated and the fantasy aspect was just out of this world. Keep writing!
LOVED IT! LOVED IT! I don't know how I could have missed reading such a WONDERFUL story, but I am very happy that i did. It was absolutely and beautifully written. I has become one of my FAVORITES.
They better run like the wind cause Sesshomaru's going to be pissssssssssssssed!
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