Sugoi~~~!!! You captured the raw emotions so well! It's almost like I am seeing Sesshoumaru dying before my eyes and I can totally feel Kagome's pain. T^T
And teehee.. The things you wrote are so cinematic that it's like watching an anime? Like the spin-off of Hakuouki, I tell you! lol~ Absolutely brilliant! You made both the SessKag fangirl and Hakuouki fangirl inside me experienced a super fangasm.. XD