wow what an interesting story this is i really do like it but im guessing since midoriko is in the story it wont be quite like the other one any ways keep up the great work i hope you update soon ^_^ 

I love this story. I wanted to scream and jump around like an idiot when i read the characters that were introduced but my roommate looked at me funny when i started squealing. I enjoyed the read very much. Keep up the good work ^______^