I enjoyed that, and appreciated not having to wade though the lyrics to find the story. :)

I love it!

i loved it

I liked this songfic...It is one of the best ones I've read.

Excellent!  Part of the chapter got posted twice, you could go to edit to clean it up.  Great story, with a strong lesson in it for InuYasha.  Keep on writing, you are awesome!

Lovin' It!  I stole that from WacDnld's advertising campagin, it seemed appropriate...

I really like this a lot!  While the story line is very fun, as a writer I especially notice your excellent spelling and grammar.  Exceptional!

Very well-written, especially for a "high-school fic".  That sounds kind of condescending, but I really enjoy high-school stories.  It's just most of them come up kind of short when it comes to spelling and grammar.  No problem with that in this story!  I look forward to reading more.

FABULOUS STORY! PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE IT!

I loved it , it reminded me of a story I read off of fanfiction.net but this one is better . lol

LOVED IT! you gonna continue it at all? like a sequel? or oneshots going through their courtship? pwease?

btw, in chap4 the Sorry Boy you Missed Out part was posted twice before This is How the Story Ends

You know I kinda thought the plot line was good but the story progressed too fast leaving much to be desired. Though I must say I have been inspired to write my own fic with a similar plot. I miss high school fics. Anyway, I hope this review didn't sound mean or anything.

I really enjoyed this, I don't usually like song fics because they add the lyrics all over the place & some of the songs are really long, but I liked this 1 a lot. The last chapter needs a bit of an edit though, it gets down to the end, minus the last sentence & epilogue paragraphs & then starts at the beginning again & that 1 has the last sentence & epilogue.

Cute little lesson here - nice little read!

Amber