Keep it coming....
I really liked this story the first time I read it. So, Kagome does penance for Kikyou's sins so that she can be reborn 500 years later with a pure soul... ow, my head! But I hope Kikyou still has to do penance when she dies again. I never understood how Kikyou could not be considered a monster since she devoured souls to stay 'alive'... devoured them, meaning that all those souls are gone, never to have the chance to be reborn... demons may not care, but humans should have been concerned about that aspect.
Sesshoumaru's retribution ranks up at the top of "look what an idiot you are" scenes. Even though I felt justified... I also felt sorry for Inuyasha, mostly because he realized some of it himself, but far too many years too late. He made his own bed, didn't he?
Anyhow, awesome plot!
I so love these stories. I was so surprised to see that you had revised them. These stories were one of the first I read about Sessh/Kag, and really got me hooked on the pairing. My hats off to you my dear. Beautiful story. Can't wait for the last revision. (Inner self lets out a girly squeal, and I am not a girly girl :D Yea)
Sweet, sweet justice. Wonderful re-write. I'm anxiously awaiting the final part to the tale.
This series has always been my favorite! out of all the amazing stories on this site which I totally adore, this series is the best hands down. I love, love, love it! I especially love Fuyu no Kokoro...Sesshomaru's revenge is wonderfully written and I love reading it.
I always get teary eyed when I read this first little bit.
Very poetic. I've always liked this little series, and when I saw you'd decided to do a revision I was like 'Whaaaa? XD' Yup, just like that. crazy face and all.
Moving on the the next chapter with much anticipation.
Oh wow! I adored the original, and now you've re-written it??? The additions make for an even more emotional read. Much as I love "Fetch", and the rest of your stories, I think this one is my favorite of yours. Possibly on the whole site. I'm totally looking forward to "Fuyu no Shimekiri". Can I be your fangirl? <showers you with zen chocolate>
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