| That was so... MEAN! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!!!!! I'm gettin my torch.....
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 12) - Thu 21 Aug 2008
| Gah... say it ain't soo... why must you torture me with the evil cliffy! It was getting good too. Please, please update soon. :P
| *mans her pitchfork* Damn you and your cliffhangers! Please update soon!
Setsuna-chan (Chapter 12) - Tue 19 Aug 2008
| PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! I need to know if it worked or not!
Lil Kit (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
| Kyaa!!
NOOOO!!! TT^TT
Why tis this chapter end so soon!
Why oh why!
*whimpers* Please update *on knees and begs*
This chapter was really good ^^
I hope to read more!! Thanx for updating this chapter! ^^
| ::standing with lit torch and twirling subjacation collor around finger:::
Oh Lady Sianna!!
Wonderful chapter but the cliffie is driving me CRAZY!!!!
Update soon or I'll use the collar! ;)
LadySafire
freakygal (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
| too soon! too short! it drive me crazy! T.T but wat a nice chapt.. haha love it..hope u update soon!! thx~
kagomesirene (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
| oh you`re really the devil himself ;) such a cliffy is really mean..but i wonder..is the collar really more powerful than the curse?...and what`s going to happen should someone remove the necklace...is she going to forget everythnig again---so many questions....pleaseeeeeeeeeeee update soon
kagomesirene (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
| oh you`re really the devil himself ;) such a cliffy is really mean..but i wonder..is the collar really more powerful than the curse?...and what`s going to happen should someone remove the necklace...is she going to forget everythnig again---so many questions....pleaseeeeeeeeeeee update soon
L-desu (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
| damn, sessy dipped in the chocolate!! nawtie nawtie.... loved your update, can't wait for the next!
| Hello miss. May I introduce you "Demon", otherwise known as "The Cliffie Devourer". Yea, I know, he's still a cutte little puppy, but what can I say, I only created him a few secons ago to write my review... ahem... anyway -puts puppy away for his nap-, good chapter, good story this far. No, I haven't reviewed here, but... well, shame on me, I only read this story now. Good for me though, good fics are hard to find, even more "advanced" ones ^_^
So, lass, very good work. But be careful, my cruel cliffie chaser hell hound will be less lenient next time -pats the small head of the sleeping puppy- Dewa mata XD
| No, It can't end now, not there! ;O
It was getting way to good! I hope you update A.S.A.P !!! I can't wait to read more of your amazing story!
Keep it up and please update soon.
Kambri_Jade
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K,T,M (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
| ....... dere has to be somthing wrong with my computer, dere is no way da chapter ended like dat, dat has to be da BIGGEST and most annoying cliffie i have EVER seen DX i dink i gonna crt :..( please update soon XD
| Ok I just read what you wrote in your story and I love it PLEASE PLEASE have another chapter up soon..
Athemea (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
| Dear Lady Sianna,
I have only recently discovered your piece and I must say, since the first chapter I have been hooked. I did not stop reading all the chapters until I came to this last one. I really enjoy your writing style as it is very easy to follow. Your word choice I must say is very well picked. It puts the reader into the room as an observer and leaves no room for improvement on that end. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
-Athemea
Athemea (Chapter 12) - Mon 18 Aug 2008
| Dear Lady Sianna,
I have only recently discovered your piece and I must say, since the first chapter I have been hooked. I did not stop reading all the chapters until I came to this last one. I really enjoy your writing style as it is very easy to follow. Your word choice I must say is very well picked. It puts the reader into the room as an observer and leaves no room for improvement on that end. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
-Athemea
| I read your first chapter. It was pretty good. I like how clean and neat your storytelling is. I think though it could benefit from a little more description. Explore all of the senses a bit more. Sounds, smells, textures, tastes. It helps a lot to immerse the reader.
| I love this story, and i always get so excited about a new chapter. ^.^ I cant wait for the next one
| Oh my..... You stopped there Aww man it was getting good. Well can't do anything about it Thought I wish I could. MMMM can I say GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!! Can you plz put the next one up soon.....PLZZ
Davita (Chapter 12) - Sun 17 Aug 2008
| I will hunt you down and tie down in front of the computer and make sure that you finish this story!!! JK
Enjoyed the chapter update soon ;)............or else hehehe
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