Amber, this chapter had me in tears...and kudos to you for staying a faithful and dedicated writer. I have fibromyalgia and I also take phenergan and I can't even think straight when its in my system. People like you are few and far between...hope you and your daughter get to feeling better. By the way, AMAZING STORY!!!
koneji (Chapter 64) - Fri 15 Jun 2012
I have conflicting feelings about their plan to break off their ties to the rest of world, but I can see that it does make sense. Anyways, it was a pleasure to read through another one of your stories from beginning to it's end! I'm looking forward to your other works now~
Ah, he's a toughie i like to snuggle with. Glad he's finally learned his lessons, even if it took a really long time in human thinking. Can't wait to read the epilogue and your next Splintered realities. loved this chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
while i lov this, maybe i'm forgetting, wasn't papa an asshat for taking sessmomma just to beget sess. did that fall away or something? b/c love as he might, Izayoi and his son's he was still an ass to sessmomma. :\ i still love the fic but thats all iwa s wondering about when this chapter ended
elley (Chapter 63) - Thu 14 Jun 2012
Bittersweet that this has to end. To be honest, I don't think this chapter really captured Sesshoumaru's personality although I see where you're going with it. Sesshoumaru himself seemed to be too wordy for me in a rambling sense. I wouldn't mind how much he had to say except he seemed to be repeating the same sentiment in new ways for most of it. It's strange since the words definitely referred to Sesshoumaru's experience, but the tone made me think more of Inuyasha's style of dialogue for some reason. I guess I have always thought of Sesshoumaru speaking to the point and never with extra words.
Anyways, thank you for the wonderful journey you haven given us and you can count on me to be reading this story again.
Suki~B (Chapter 63) - Thu 14 Jun 2012
I love a full circle! A well written story from every view.
You have wrapped up this tale quite wonderfully. Sess now indeed understands what his sire attempted to teach. This will only make him a better ruler, husband, father, and son. I loved this tale too, and to think there are so many others you have to share with us, I'm excited!
Loving the story so far :) Great character developement, and great story overall ;)
Can't wait to read more!
This is nice and touching. And Sesshomaru is like any other older sibling. I should know. I'm one and I can relate. Looking forward to the epi.
Saraniya (Chapter 63) - Thu 14 Jun 2012
Wow.... serious full circle with this story and its so sad but cute that it's coming to an end as alll good things must meet the same fate... :)
Loved it, how can i not? Always so sweet together.
MArtha (Chapter 62) - Wed 13 Jun 2012
This was great chapter looking forward to more but same time kinda sad it would be over then.
Another excellent chapter. This is wrapping up quite nicely!
i likes it :3
TKE (Chapter 62) - Wed 13 Jun 2012
Just makes you want to fall in love all over again!!!!
Go mating chamber! Awesome place to seal the deal in, hehe. As always your lemon was awesomely thought through. Can't wait to see the next chapter and anything else Sesshomaru might have forgotten to tell her as well. I loved this chapter, cant wait to see the next one.
Hot!!! You managed to make it lovey, dovey romantic but sexy with the lemon :)
TKE (Chapter 61) - Mon 11 Jun 2012
That chapter was absolutely beautiful and very romantic!!!!! I'm sooooo happy for them!!!
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