Sweet, I'm really enjoying this, even in small doses.
I don't normally give advice, especially to people I don't know, but I just wanted to tell you something my family tells me when I am stuck on something. Just take a step back from what your doing for a few days and do something entirely different.I don't know where yo live but for me the beach is only a Half hour away and I would just go there for the day and have fun, read a book and so on. Then the next day come back to what you are stressed about.
Good luck, hope you feel better
Plus, i love your stories and from this chapter I don't see anything wrong with you writing.
I am so sorry for your hardships. *hugs* if you need them. I feel that the sensible among us would understand if you needed to take some time to relax and unwind. Get away from the stories and the stress.
be well.
i think i'm in love with the miko puzzle! :3 this is amusing !!
miko = puzzle = ♥s!!!
i love this so much its so cute!
i do very much like this story ^_^
Beautiful update! I love reading about Sesshoumaru's thoughts and feelings with him still being in character. you keep proving your skills as an author and I always look forward to your updates on ANY story you write :D
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Natalie (Chapter 4) - Sun 15 Aug 2010
Oooh...I love this so far! I love it when a author provides an insight as far as Sesshomaru's emotions and thoughts. I cant wait to read more of this!
._. must keep puzzle alive... for now... >:3 hahahaha
Kagome = puzzle
puzzle = frustrated daiyoukai
frustrated daiyoukai = kagome
♥
Oh that was pretty cute!! :) Sesshoumaru has lots to learn from Kagome when it comes to love, so it seems. The way you've phrased it is adorable...keeping the puzzle alive. Nice one, Amber! :)
So pretty! I really love how believable the interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru is- just beautiful.
Can't wait for more!
i like how kagome's all @_@ my DAiyoukai's broken, must fix! *tinker* lovely really. ^_^
Noacat (Chapter 3) - Wed 21 Jul 2010
This is one of those stories that are little gems that I passed by and passed by and then one day I read and understood what I was missing. Love it!
Your writing is truly inspiring and your sense of logic has made me see things in a different light. I like how you thought of how the sword was given to Inuyasha because he was the weaker one.
OMG I LOVED IT SOOOO MUCH!
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