Very poignant lesson to be learned here! Love it and going to another.
As you know, I love your stories, however, I do have a bit of a question that has been nagging me whenever I read this story. You do not have to answer it if you don't want to, but I feel as though I have to voice it. When Kikyo catches up with InuYasha, and finds out about the betrayal that him and Sango have perpetrated against Kagome, she curses Sango. My question is this, Why didn't she curse InuYasha instead? In my opinion it would have been better served to curse him instead, because at any time he could leave Sango and pup someone else, and then him and Sango raise it as their own.
Or the fact that Sango wouldn't live his life span, unless he did like Sesshoumaru did to Kagome and drenched her in youki to extend her life. While I do understand why you had Kikyo curse Sango, I feel it would have been better to curse InuYasha. At least that is my opinion, and well this is your story, so my opinion doesn't really affect the story. lol.
I do have to admit though, I so very much enjoy reading and re-reading your stories, they bring me much joy. Plus they take forever to read through, and that is what makes it even more enjoyable for me. The fact that I won't finish it in a couple of hours and so I have something that will occupy my time for at least one to two days depending on the story I am reading. :)
i can see both ways. to take awya her right to ebar children to carry on the slayer name even is sad but i guess it''s fitting to an extent as well. i'm glad shippo and miroku were forgiven and sesshomaru seemd to enjoy his pakc expanding with them and their mates.
Love it! I just found thid story and I really loved it!
-Forgotten!
Awesome story, definatly worth a reading again once I run out of others. Again great story.
amy (Chapter 3) - Wed 11 May 2011
A sad but fitting ending, thank you for finishing the fan fic!
I loved this story thanks for a great story.
Indie (Chapter 3) - Sun 13 Feb 2011
I love your work. Your writing stlye moves along so well. And the romance in this was spot on, without being trashy. I like your take on this plotline. Everyone was in character, and I found Kikyo's revenge to be perfect. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)
lara (Chapter 3) - Fri 11 Feb 2011
I didn't see that coming .............I didn't think Kikyo would do that to Sango. I actually think she should have done it Inuyasha since if he did the same to Sango that he did to Kikyo & Kagome then he'd be able to Mate another woman one day or if Sango was killed by someone who hunted hanyou's ,hanyou's mates & kids then he'd be able to find another Mate .......but if Kikyo had cursed Inuyasha then it would be him personally that would never have child of his own......Sango had already lost her entire family & village.
I liked this story though I'd have liked to have been able to have seen more of how the relationship between Sessh & Kagome had changed from one of distance to Mates...I would have loved to have seen it from his perspective if he'd really been watching, waiting & hoping for an opening all along............I'd have love to have seen that. I also wish that Shippo would have chased her down.....if he had gone after her crying that he wanted to tell her but Inuyasha had threatened him & told her he didn't want to be left with them but wanted to be with her I think she'd have taken him.
Rin (Chapter 3) - Sat 05 Feb 2011
Interesting. I like how you wrote Sesshoumaru's character. I think Kagome was close, but something was slightly off to me.
Worth the read, and simple yet full enough to keep me in the story.
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Mon 09 Aug 2010
i just loved your story i think what inuyasha and sango got was perfect for then. i also love the lesson behind the story you worte, i have gone through that before and in the end that person ended up alone. so anyways i loved your story i think people should read this story it will teach them a very good lesson about betrayal. ♥!!!LOVE THIS STORY!!!♥
This was an AWESOME story. I loved it. Great job.
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