Sailor Moon new anime has already aired two episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube and episode 3 of Sailor Moon Crystal airs tomorrow. Interesting, keep it coming
This is so sad...
It makes me depressed and I sort of want to cry.
Interesting start to this story and would love to see where you take it. Though I would reccomend adding a bit more detail to the story to help the chapter blossom a bit.
This is a very good start, you have an interesting way of telling the story. However, I would recommend that you go back through and check your grammar, there were a few spots in the story that felt very choppy because of it, but they are all easy fixes. As i said you have a great start here ad with a little tweaking it will be an excellent and unique story. Keep up the good work!
Very, very good start to this story...I really want to read more.I have to say that from the first paragraph on you caught my attention and kept it to the very end, though some would be upset about the cliffy I think that you ended the chapter at the right point to leave your reader's wanting more. ^-^ Keep up the good work!
What a heart wrenching first chapter! It definitely grabs your attention from the start, and makes me curious about how it will progress. I'd go through and do a double check on your spelling and grammar. There were a few easy fixes that you could make that would really help make the story flow more smoothly. I think you have very eloquent thoughts to convey, but they sometimes get lost in the gramatical errors.
Wow, what a great start. Oh the cliffy,*sighs and pretends to faint* You have definitely set this up to be a great story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Well done.I
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