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Midnight Cat (Chapter 6) - Sat 17 Apr 2010

This was a very difficult chapter to read... The pain that Sesshomaru is suffering is so deep that it just reaches across and it makes you feel for him like if you were a part of the story and could see it all in front of you. It must be so dificult for him to see how disable he was and how much he has come to depend on a species for which he only held desdain.

His memories are obviously very traumatic and it still remains to be seen how deeply have they affected him psychologically speaking.

I hope he learns to open up more towards Kagome and we can see more of what happened to him in the past.

Thank you again for sharing, I look forward to your next chapter with much anticipation!

Hugs:

MidCat


Cinne (Chapter 6) - Sat 17 Apr 2010

Wow. These chapters are simply amazing. I absolutely love how you actually wrote his improvement. I have nothing but words of awesomeness for you, and this story~! <33333 Can't wait till the next update.


Nysrina (Chapter 6) - Sat 17 Apr 2010

I read through all the available chapters last night, and I must say that, while I have read a good number of well-written fics, this one had me by the brain stem and would not let go. I saw the sneak at Spark too. I commend you on the length of time you spent on this particular work and the amount of research (or perhaps, information gleaned from real-life experiences?) infused into the chapters drew me into this little universe you've created and made it thoroughly realistic.

Sesshoumaru's helpless state and Kagome's oscillation between despair and determination being his caregiver tugged at the heartstrings, made the corners of my mouth turn down at some points and made me cheer at others.

I enjoyed the pace you set, peeling off one layer of the story at a time, never rushing, always leading. Kudos for a story that is extremely well-done :) I look forward to future chapters!


LadySafire (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

I had to leave you a review about you story. I absolutely love it!

 Sesshomaru has a horrible case of PTSD though. I really feel for him during the flashbacks.

I can't wiat to read more.


Maria (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

Wow! Just wow. There aren't many fanfics anymore that seem original or that can keep my interest past the first chapter, but this is deffinitely one that is... I LOVE it! Keep the chapters coming! :D


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

I really hope that one day he'll be able to open up to kagome about what happened to him, and I hope he can get better. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!


snowbird (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

This chapter had a spot of laughter, other times a warm feeling.  Such as when she presented him with the top he had wanted.  At the end was the heart wrenching moment that you just wanted to embrace him and erase his scars mentally and physically.  They are becoming so close that I don't believe they would ever be happy apart.


FayeMegan (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

If this whole story was posted I could read through the whole thing without stopping!


fatcatmom (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

Excellent read and very engaging story. Kagome fears abandonment but she will help Sess recover, find out who did what to him, and plan to avenge his wounds. Based on how quickly the gastric tube healed nothing is wrong with his healing abilities so he has been cursed somehow with the scars on his back. Thanks for your excellent work and please update soon!


fatcatmom (Chapter 3) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

Hooray! He's responding.....GREAT JOB ON THIS STORY! Can't wait for the next chapters!


Saide (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

That was definitely quick of you, ugh....I wanna cry everytime Sesshomaru becomes too melancholic. T^T


stars (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

please updata


Rowdys girl (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

Oh, I sooo owe you reviews for this story! It is excellent. It is obvious that you are a member of the nursing field, your familiarity with care and rehab are obvious, however, your writing skills overshadow your nursing skills. Wonderful complex characters, each with their own motivations and an intriguing storyline that has me as hooked as any drug could! You have mad skills, girl, and I am loving this tale.


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 5) - Fri 16 Apr 2010
This is a very touching fic with a vulnerable Sesshomaru having to deal with the modern era after a long sleep. I'm sure it's not easy dealing with a patient who's been in a vegetative state for a long time before a slow recovery. Can't wait for more.

Saide (Chapter 5) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

the way you write is like I'm watching a very emotional movie. ;__; it's making me very emotional, and I'm loving it! <3


FayeMegan (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Apr 2010

I almost cried when Kagome awoke from that first dream about InuYasha. I can't wait for tomorrow's chapter, I am addicted. ;3


snowbird (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Apr 2010

I love the way they're bonding so tightly to each other.


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Apr 2010

This was a very interesting chapter, I can't help but wonder what's going to happen next and as always look forward to your next update!


KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Apr 2010

An amazing chapter. Love it. The way you describe the situation. You make Sesshoumaru vulnerable and yet you can still keep him in character. I cant wait for the next chapter.


M. Sheldon (Chapter 5) - Thu 15 Apr 2010

Real, real nice. It's so good to find, finally, such a well-written SesshXKag's fanfic.. Please, keep up with the good work!


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