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IrishBlackRosie (Chapter 1) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

I am absolutely in love with your style of writing! It is epic! :) I cannot get enough and I am thoroughly glad you post daily. :)


Saide (Chapter 9) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

Description of the heart surgery makes my heart squirm. ; A ; Your details are soooooo vivid!

I will be looking forward for your next chapter. :3


mikaelalucine (Chapter 9) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

Only a few more months to live, noooooo!!!! Sesshy must survive no matter what, it's funny that he can't have sex though. Please update soon!!


fatcatmom (Chapter 9) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

Another excellent and totally engaging chapter--well done! They both both have gone through so much in such a short time-- you converyed that perfectly through Kagome's thoughts. I'm so happy Sess has chosen to live and go forward. Can't wait for his reactions to the new world (I feel like the song from Aladdin 'I Can Show You the World' should be the background music). Just one question: how do you type and cross-match a dog demon when human blood is usually the only one available in the blood bank? 


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 9) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

oooh Sesshy's going in for surgery O.O... I hope everything goes alright, and seriously whoever thought that a Demon could have a heart murmur?! But I suppose it makes sense considering he started to digest his own body to stay alive all those years. I really hope the surgury goes alright and all that good stuff. Keep up the great work!!


Jekya (Chapter 9) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

omg thnx u so much for updating evry day i appreciate not having to wait sooo much ur story is great cant wait 4 chap 10 keep up the good work luv it :)


Inusbabe (Chapter 8) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

This has to be one of my favorite stories at the moment. I keep refreshing my Dokuga for when the next chapter is up.

I hope to learn more the internal workings of Sesshoumaru's mind. What is he thinking and feeling...


jgem (Chapter 8) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

Chapter 7 was so well written that I couldn't stop thinking of the pain and anguish both Kagome and Sesshoumaru are going through for the next few hours. It's interesting how we can seem to be over things, and then one day, something triggers all those emotions yet again. 

As for chapter 8...gah! This must be that roller coaster ride you were mentioning. The lemon was just WOW! To me, it seemed that you did a really great job showing the emotional need driving the physical need to connect. And then, just as I was relishing them being together, wham. You throw in that plunging drop.

By the way, I LOVE the line where Sesshoumaru tells Kagome that she is the only he would trust with his heart. Perhaps you meant to write it only literally, but this reader is choosing to see it for its double meaning and the second meaning is so sweet.

Can't wait to see what this week's chapters bring. Especially with the intro of that Kanrau/Narakuish sounding character.


Midnight Cat (Chapter 8) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

Oh God! That was amazing sex! However the fact that it ended in a sad note made everything seem surreal.

I can still feel myself shivering while reading it! It was so wonderful to finally have them together, then to find out that this could have affected Sesshomaru in such a way!

Now we know for sure how deeply wounded is Sesshomaru's soul, and all I can say is that he needs to heal this as much as he needs to heal his soul!

Thank you so much for this great chapter!! I love you much!!

Hugs:

MidCat


love you so much (Chapter 8) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

WOW. *speechless*   WOW.... O_O


dayna (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

That was simply amazing!. I mean the senual grace in which Sessy made Kagome realize she was beautiful and the same for Kagome making Sessy realize he is beautiful too. The lemon was awesome too by the way hehe. I really feel bad that Sesshomaru doesnt think he is able to satisfy her but that is so not true, i actually hope that the problem with his heart fixes itself but if not im sure kagome will be able to find a way to fix it.


FayeMegan (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

Oh my. That was wonderful yet depressing at the same time. Kagome must feel so defeated. I hope she doesn't let it get to her too much and convince Sesshoumaru to embrace his life now and get better.


fatcatmom (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

Wonderful character development. Surely the handsome doctor is a demon in disguise and is onto Sess and will help him. Just read up on starvation and mitral valve problems from the inspirations of this chapter: studies confirm they are completly reversible with proper nutrition so hopefully this is also the case with our favorite dog demon. And, by the way, great lemon! Poor Kagome, her post-glow ruined by his passing out. But that type of activity is great therapy, both physically and emotionally. Will some pups be on the way? Can't wait to see!


Rin Akarui (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

Wow. This is simply a breath taking story. I love how you wrote Sesshomaru as a demon, but isn't the immortal and immune creature that people frame him to be.

It really shows how Kagome and Sesshomaru can truly be "realistic". Great story! Please keep up the work! :)


theunknownchild (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

Ooh, intense! Looking foreward to tomorrow!


KyuubiPandoraChan (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

I woke up like 5am just to read this. it was morning in my time...XD and this chapter proved that waking up this early is worth it. This chapter was amazing and sweet. I really love how you write about them. Its amazing. Poor Sesshoumaru though...It makes me sad to see him like this. Another amazing chapter.


mikaelalucine (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

Awww I almost cried at the end how sad for Sesshoumaru. Please update soon!!!!


Aubrey Simone (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

Another wonderful chapter, and a tastefully done, very well-written lemon! (And, for the record, I take back my comment about things moving too fast!) Again, you're a wonderful writer, and I can't wait to see more!

Much Love,

~Aubrey


Cinne (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

Oh wow. I think the male doc will turn out to be a Naraku reincarnation! Sesshomaru is so heartbreaking in this chapter, more so at the end. <33 Loved this chappy!


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 8) - Sun 18 Apr 2010

Dang girl, that was hot... but poor Sesshy >.< I really hope his heart can get better and if not I hope he can get a new valve... it would just be too sad to have him die after everything that he's already gone through. I also hope that he'll be able to let Kagome in one day, since it's obvious he is still trying to keep her out, even after the moment they shared. As always it was awesome and I can't wait til tomorrow for the next chapter!


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