trying not to sound completely retarded bbbuuuuuttttt
HOLY COW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is freakin awesome its a good read on of the best ive read cant wait for an update and and i have theories!! lol i love the imagery that you've put into this as well as the.... life? i think is the word im lookin for were you can see this almost happening it has a depth to it cant wait to read the next chapter mega kudos
