Homaigod.  You're alive!  I remember this story quite well, and was really sad that you'd poof'd. 

I'm glad you've brought this story onto Dokuga, and I can't wait for the rest of the chapters.

OMG, Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I remember reading this story a while ago(on another site), it was a great stoy and I'm so glad you brought it here, I'm gonna re-read it as you post it. :)