amazing story please continue
Hm, interesting... I'll be looking forward to new chapters! ^.^
TO THE BEACH~~!!!!! ^O^
lol interesting!
interesting! i really would love to se kagome beat sango up >_>
eh *hopes kagome takes miro and shippo, and kirara away leaves yusha and sango.. idiots!
'Than' should not be mistaken for 'then.'
Hmm this is an interesting story. I like the way you're writing Kagome very, very much. Sesshoumaru is pretty mellow in this story so far, but I like his occasional jibes towards Inuyasha hehe. I'm confused over Sango's behavior. Did something happen that is making her so acidic towards Kagome? Has there been some misunderstanding on her part? Or are you just writing her in a way that will suit your story. At anyrate, it's very different from her canon character. I hope her behavior gets explained further. Congratulations on your wedding. I look forward to the next update. Keep up the good work!
An chapter's are likely to get your fic deleted. please remove this b/c an admin finds it and takes your fic down.
totally love his beasty and this fic so far!
I really love this story so far :) It is well written and very interesting! I look forward to whenever your next update comes :)
congrats jj i wish you and you future spouse well.
The internal dialogue with Sesshoumaru and his beast was nicely handled. I liked how it referred to Rin as his 'pup'. You did well with his dialogue with Kagome also. It sounded much like it would in the anime. His reasons are well thought out, as well as the plot so far.
This is a good start to the story. I liked the description and dialogue. The characters are nicely handled. I'm watching this story for certain. Keep up the good work.
Yay!!!
I got mentioned!!!
Nice job on chapter two J.J., I'm looking forward to more ^^
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