Good to see characters who follow their intuition for once! Also, you have shown once again how Rin manages to see what no-one else notices - it's nice to have a character who actually gets it! Sesshoumaru's comment about how the flower should be placed in the book was also very IC - showing he cares in a subtle way - and that it pleased Kagome as well shows she's starting to understand too.
Woo! Go Rin! *cheers her on* So far, Rin seems to be the only one who really has any idea of what's going on, but she always was the kind to look deeper. And Kagome seems to be starting to know Sesshoumaru, so yay for the beginning of the Sess/Kag!
I liked Kagome's outlook on life in this chapter - she really gave Sesshoumaru something to think about! And, once again, Rin is the cutest thing ever - the line where they both wore identical expressions of curiosity made a very nice mental image.
Awww, Rin is so adorable! I want a Rin now... Sesshoumaru and Kagome are both very IC as well, and the style of your writing flows well! Now, only 99 chapters left to review!
This chapter is without a doubt one of my absolute favorites. It gives me happy feelings everytime I read it :)
Hesunohana (Chapter 100) - Tue 11 May 2010
just GREAT ! I loved to read these drabbles. until the very end.
lol I have to tell you that I was in the middle of reading your story when you reviewed mine. I was like "Whoa! WTF. Coincidence!"
So, anyways, this story is extremely cute. I love how you have Sess express his feelings. It's PERFECT. I can't imagine him ever REALLY just going out and professing his undying love via words. Sesshomaru is definitely an action kind of guy. Your characterizations are A+++!
Now since I'm only halfway through--ONWARD!
Shinobue (Chapter 100) - Sat 03 Apr 2010
Simply perfect. No other words are needed.
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Mar 2010
Congratulations The Flower Girl has won third place for best romance in the Dokuga 4th quarter awards. You can pick up your awesomely made banner, complements of the lovely Priestess Skye, at http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/9/16/1970.png. Congrats again and keep up the amazing work :).
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Mar 2010
Congratulations The Flower Girl has won second place for best Kagome portrayal in the Dokuga 4th quarter awards. You can pick up your awesomely made banner, complements of the lovely Priestess Skye, at http://www.dokuga.com/images/awards/banners/9/13/1761.png. Congrats again and keep up the amazing work :).
gina (Chapter 100) - Fri 05 Mar 2010
one of the most amazing stories i have ever read. thank you so much for sharing. simply beautiful!!!!!
Sandreline Moon (Chapter 100) - Thu 04 Mar 2010
It's finally over! I can't believe it! I have been with this story since chapter 1, and it's finally over!
I admire your determination and that you updated everyday. This story was not only brilliant original, but so incredibly written that there are no words to describe it. You have an incredible talent, brava!
I look forward to your future works!
~Sandreline
Kira (Chapter 100) - Thu 04 Mar 2010
KAWAII NE! I loved it. You must continue to write.
KAggie (Chapter 100) - Thu 04 Mar 2010
I'm glad that you made it too 100! And beautifully done as well! I really love this story and will probably read this again many times over! Wonderful, beautiful job!
hopuchan (Chapter 100) - Thu 04 Mar 2010
thanks for going all the way to 100!! its was a great ending to the story. i'm glad all loose strings were tied up. this has been one of my fave reads even tho i haven't reviewed.
What a lovely ending to such an awesome fic. And you made it to 100 chappies! Congrats on placing in the Dokuga Awards. Everyone has someone, except those who died for their own selfish reasons. *claps*
Great Job Amber. It was a wonderful story.
InuAngel (Chapter 100) - Wed 03 Mar 2010
Incrediable! That was a very beautifully written story and one of the most unique fics I have ever read. You were right a lemon would have thrown the entire story off. It was perfect as written. You are an increadiable writer. Congradulations on your awards very much earned. I loved how you kept the updates coming and that you finished, I can't stand an abandoned great story. I could tell you had a great time writing this. I fell in love with your version of the characters and I love the idea you had for Kanna I always felt sorry for that little being, you gave her emotions, and a chance to grow up, love it! Even though Kanna wasn't mentioned in the story line often when she was her character stood out. Putting her with Inuyasha was excellent! Miroku and Sangos wedding night, PERFECT! I could actually see that really happening to him if he was a real person. That was so funny! I loved the flowers you chose to use in your story. I just had to let you know that you did an excellent job, beyond. Your a wonderful writer and I can't wait to see what you write next, I believe that you are now amoung my favorite writers. EXCELLENT! Write on!
Much Love
InuAngel
*^_^* I am very glad you made it to the hundreth-chapter mark! I loved this story and I hope to see more from you later as well!
That was soooooo wonderful! I'm truly sorry to see it end. I have really enjoyed coming home every day to a new chapter! Fantastic job, Amber! :)
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