It's so cute. Keep up the good work.

Wow! Please update soon!

I'm really enjoying your story! I thought you should know "Rin" can also mean "forest" which I think fits her better! =)

Have a great week! Happy New Year!

~~Mizuko~~

wow.....wonderful story!!!!

i just finished reading this story and enjoyed it immensely.  I loved the characters of Ai and Misaki.  Well done.

It was really good keep up the great work ^_^

this is so nice!

yey kohaku!

Can I cry? Poor Kagome! 

I am feeling once again bad for Kagome...shes such a kind girl!

Wee, this was interesting...poor good Kaome and I would admonish Sesshomaru if i could, he

cares too much about pride!

*Bows before the greatness that is Angelicatt-sama*  I never had a chance to review this last part, but after going back and reading it today, I simply couldn't wait.  I adore it, and you as an author.  Fantastic, wonderful, flawless... the list goes on.  I won't rant and rave, just simply say, you couldn't have done better!

awwwwwwwwwwwwww :')!!!!!!!!! crying but heartfelt. a lovely end to the chapter but i have a feeling there's more. please update!

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I knew you could do it. You need to keep writing now, you certainly have the talent, you just need to polish your skills. There were a few things, I would have had more, but the power went out and I lost it all and I'm too tired to go back to find everything. Lazy me.

Punctuation, commas, periods, question marks, etc., should at the end of the sentences that are enclosed in quotes. And the punctuation goes inside the quotes.

Recounting his memories of journeys past,

When I fell asleep it was almost sunset

“Rise and shine, sleepyhead,” she    Sleephead is one word.

and deal with it,” his head was buried so low at the end,

I almost killed her, Kagome,” he dropped   Commas are your friends.

rage that you just don’t care,” she was angry

she could call me her ojiki,” he placated

Wait, I’m confused,” she

I guess you were too out

notice it earlier, but Kohaku’s

It was Miroku, ever the diplomat, who   Commas enclose parenthetical phrases.

The place at the head of the table sat empty,

It was a really good story and I knew that romance would bloom somehow!

Beautiful story you have here. I really liked how Inuyasha finaly ended up growing up and Sesshoumaru realizing he did have a heart. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work! ^_^

What an absolutely incredible story!  I love that Kagome and Sesshoumaru were honest with each other, and I love that Sesshoumaru told Kagome of his feelings towards her.  Is there going to be a sequel?  I know you said you were going to continue writing, I just hope you mean you are going to add to this story. 

I can't wait to see Part 2!  I shall be waiting with baited breath!

This is a rather cute take on 'finding Sesshoumaru injured'. I'll be reading! Sesshoumaru's instant love realization seemed a little out of character- but he's not one to really lie to himself, so I can see it happening. Now how he goes about expressing that love should be interesting. ;p Expressing anything other than annoyance isn't really a strong suit for him. And I read on babynames.com that Rin means friend or companion in Japanese- it's a unisex name (I considered it for my babe-to-be). I really like how you have Kagome portrayed in this- it matches with my imagined version of an older, more mature Kags. I look forward to your next installment.

Thank you for sharing,

BWise

Rin means companion.