maru'sningenluvr19 (Chapter 23) - Fri 08 Apr 2016

this was a very good story. the pirate plot was an original one and you did very good writing in English. your lemon was a good one for it to be your first one written. writing lemons can be hard to do, but if you put enough thought into it you can do one. it is all in how you picture the couple, how they behave btwn each other and how much feeling you put in. it can be erotic without it being raunchy. just think about the romance novels you read and you can get a good idea from that. if the lemons you write make you feel "heated" and makes you want to go and re-read it again, you have written a good one. keep up the good writing. c'ya'


MindlessMina (Chapter 23) - Fri 18 Mar 2016

Lol that was so adorable I loved it!!


luclub (Chapter 11) - Sat 19 Nov 2011

good job!


Reema (Chapter 23) - Fri 02 Apr 2010

oh I loved the idea! very interesting on how things came to be. good job!!!! ;) I cant wait to read more of this awesomeness! 

-Reema (:


InuPriestess (Chapter 23) - Mon 16 Jun 2008
loved this story. It is refreshing to read a fanfic that is this unique. You are this story were very well done. Don't worry about it not being your first language. I believe you did okay ^-^.. I hope that you do lots and lots of other fics that are just as interesting. I most expecially liked the ending!!. castration...HAHAHA... O.o Poor Sess...lol Chao! InuPriestess

miranda (Chapter 23) - Tue 10 Jun 2008
Wow, I like your story a lot. Ithinkit is one of the best I have read in a long time. I hope you make a sequoil.:)

Koishii_Beloved (Chapter 23) - Mon 09 Jun 2008
Omg. Your story was awesome! I enjoyed it VERY VERY much! Surprisingly enough, it only took me two days to catch up and read. You did a REALLY good job! Congradulations! ^___^ -KB

Koishii_Beloved (Chapter 23) - Mon 09 Jun 2008
I forgot to say that your story was mighty cute, too ^__^ -KB

Viki (Chapter 1) - Fri 06 Jun 2008
Great Story, It was a great read and it kept me going. I can't wai to read the next Chap

Jess (Chapter 21) - Sat 31 May 2008
Awesome story! I love it! I look forward to future chapters. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Aly (Chapter 21) - Sat 31 May 2008
oh dear! what is everyone going to say when they find out that the jewel was in kagome. Did she know? Was she keeping it hidden from them? Can't wait to find out XD !! update soon. Toodles

Kiyanae (Chapter 19) - Sat 24 May 2008
awsome story, but the font was so big that is didn't fit on the screen so a lot of it was missing. justgiving u the heads up...other than that great chappie, great story.

mandy (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 May 2008
this is a wonderful tale...(i love that you didn't keep her anesic for long! it was litteraly killing me when she lost her memories,lol) Great story so far and may you continue to blossom as a writer in this story of love. mandy_26

Running in Circles (Chapter 19) - Sat 24 May 2008
Wow I'm amazed at the story. This is really good, especially since english isn't your first language. Excellent story! I can't wait for more!!

Darianna-of-Tashido (Chapter 18) - Fri 23 May 2008
how could you be so mean to us!!!!??? leaving a cliffie like that!! those things hurt when you fall off the edge and go splat!!

Lady Nefertiti (Chapter 1) - Tue 20 May 2008
hey there. An interesting take on a sess X kag fic. I've never read a pirate related one. Great job by the way and I hope you update soon. Lady Nefertiti.

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