Oh Wow, it takes quite a bit for a story to get me misty-eyed and this chapter sure did that!! Great job :)

/sniffle!

Omg, I seriously love reading your stories.

I've only read one other, the completed one, since I generally only read completed stories...But I saw that you had two more and I just had to read them!

Update soon please?

Poor Kagome, so far she hasn't found any of the happiness that she was promised.  To be hated by youkai and humans alike must be hard.  I just hope that the villagers don't try to hurt her before she can get away.  Thank you for the update.  Hope you can post again soon!

NICE! Please continue!

I say she cuts out early and gets away. Townspeople are so fickle. they want a protectory, then they chase them out only to realize they need them.

Please continue! I really like it so far! 

Great story so far i also read the pain of betrayal and i enjoyed that one as well um doyou know if there's a way I can be updated on when you write a new chap like a email or something i know ff.net has something like that i was wondering if this website does i enjoyed your stories and wish to continue reeding them. keep up the good work.

Great story!  I love how the wind is pushing Sesshoumaru towards Edo, ha ha ha.  Update soon.

People will think she's crazy hearing kids and seeing outlines of people. Wow, she is getting there, she has better control. What will happen next?

please updata

Now we get to see that strength that Kagome is known for to come forth. Yes, this story seems like it will be a great portrayal of Kagome's character. Great Job!

Well, for what it's worth...thanks for freeing me and all. I mean, I know you have this huge burden and no one to share it with, but you have my thanks and a pat on the head...LOL! I'm sorry, that was supposed to be a serious moment but the irony of it all had me laughing.

No fair! I'm actually tearing up! Ok, cannot do the emotional right now. My co-workers think I'm off enough. Wonderful chapter.

What a great Prologue! You definitely have my attention. They dying scene almost had me crying.

Beautiful update.  I like that Sesshoumaru keeps thinking about Kagome.  It certainly sounds like she could use his help.  It's too bad that she can feel the pain during her injuries.  It would be nice if being immortal also meant being painless.  Can't wait for more!

I love the beginning to this story, so heartbreaking. I even cried when Sango's ghostly presence was comforting Kagome.  I do believe you have the beginnings to a beautiful, and at times trying, adventure in store for her.  I'm glad you included Kagura with the others.  I always like it when she's grouped with the 'good guys'.

wow, I like this story. It is well done...i can't wait to see what happens next...

good job and udate soon

YEAH!! A new story!! I was so happy to see a new post with your name on it.  This is a great start you already have me hooked.  The first few chapters were so sad and that Kagome must now live and watch all she loves pass on into the mists of time is distressing. I can't wait to see how she becomes strong in order to protect the Jewel from evil and I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru entwines himself into her life! More soon I hope.

Even though Kagome is immortal Kaede isn't.  I really hope she is a quick learner!  Or will Kaede send her to learn with someone else?  Thank you for the updates.  I can't wait for more! 

I'm so glad that Kagome got to talk to her friends one last time.  I can't imagine the guilt and sadness she feels over their deaths.  I'm also glad that Kagura talked to her.  Even though Kagome didn't know what she meant, it's nice that she gave her her blessing.  I like the beginning to your story.  I can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru and Kagome interact once she's awake.