This was a really nice chapter. Again, I liked how everything flowed. The pace was really nice and I enjoyed getting Shippou's insight. I'm really looking forward to seeing whether or not Kagome will infiltrate Inuyasha's dream and how he will react if she does.
I'll get to the next chapter as soon as I can. I need to work on my own story now so once I'm done with that, I'll get back to reading. =D
autumngold (Chapter 12) - Sat 14 Nov 2009
I am so, so happy that Kagome won't have to stay with Inuyasha after he brings her back! Sesshoumaru was so right, it was selfish of Inuyasha not to make any type of vow to Kagome in return, not to promise to always be there for her. Is this what will make Sesshoumaru and Kagome's bond stronger? Can't wait til your next post! This is an incredible story!
stars (Chapter 12) - Sat 14 Nov 2009
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spdswyf (Chapter 11) - Fri 13 Nov 2009
Another blow you away chapter. The thought you had to put into to these chapters is unreal, one moment you are having Sess speak the lines and you some how come up with the perfect thoughts for each. It's like watching a movie in my mind. You have a story SO worth reading, trust me girl you have one of the FEW well written stories!!!!
I must say this story is one of the most unique stories I ever had the pleasure of reading. It reminds me of the book the five people you meet in heaven but instead of meeting people it is just sesshie. What a great story.
This story is unlike any of the stories that I've read so far and I commend you for this. Your story explains Sesshomaru from his point of view and not someone guessing it. It is strictly told by him and in all honesty no one should be able to read him. It flows very well also. And if they are brought back I hope that Kagome sits him to hell for not abiding by her wishes. He chose Kikyo and that should appease him but he wants to be a stubborn ass about it. Oh back to the review >_<.............fabulous story, keep up the outstanding works and please update soon. I almost killed my computer when I discovered there were no more chapters available to read. lol
stars (Chapter 11) - Fri 13 Nov 2009
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I can see InuYasha doing this- he's the type to be never satisfied. Even though he KNOWS that Kagome doesn't want to come back, he can't let go...
autumngold (Chapter 11) - Thu 12 Nov 2009
I really love the update! It's nice to think that the real reason Sesshoumaru saved Inuyasha from his demon blood was for Kagome. Also it is sweet how he wants her for himself. Does Sesshoumaru want to go back? Is he worried about Rin? Can't wait for more of your story!
This story is so wonderful! I almost started to cry as I read it. I could feel Sess' heartache and pain. Great Job!
This was an INTENSE chapter! I love the part where Sesshoumaru looses it! That whole section just had me glaring at the computer screen with wide eyes. *sighs*
As far Inuyasha, I would never bash him. In spite of his obvious flaws, I love that guy! I think you are portraying him well. I could really see him following the course of action you set out for him and I can't wait to see what will become of his plans.
Now that I am all caught up, I can't wait till next chapter!
I am rather enjoying the increasing depth of this story. You continue to portray Sesshoumaru in a way which is very consistent with his original character, and the way he connects with Kagome early on is really believable and interesting to read. Great work yet again and off I go to the next chapter!
*squeals* I loved this chapter. Inuyasha's reaction, though predictable and unreasonable, was somehow endearing to me. I enjoyed how possessive he became when he found out that Kagome was with Sesshoumaru and I loved Sesshoumaru's answer to him. I can't wait to see how this will all play out, though I am a little worried as to what is going to happen to Inuyasha. Even if he does manage to bring Kagome back, it is not going to go well for him. =[
I have to catch up...
I rather enjoyed this chapter. Now that everything is all set up, it was nice to see a slightly slower pace. I am still enjoying how you have pieced parts from the manga in to fit your story. It gives it a more realistic feel.
Well, off I go to the next chapter!
autumngold (Chapter 10) - Wed 11 Nov 2009
I'm sorry for bashing Inuyasha, but he makes me so mad. I just wish he wouldn't be able to cause Kagome anymore pain! I'm so glad that Kagome now knows how Sesshoumaru feels about her. Thank you for letting her open up her heart to him. Great update!
spdswyf (Chapter 10) - Wed 11 Nov 2009
BRAVO!! What a wonderful chapter, I should say the whole story so far. With each sentence my heart beat a little faster and I was getting light headed from holding my breath. Keep up the good work and I will be looking forward to the next chapter!
loving the story can't wait for the update ..... well I hope Inu pulls his head out of his ass but honestly I want him to do it AFTER he revives the both of them so they can have the chance to be with Rin and Shippo again they need their parents.
autumngold (Chapter 9) - Wed 11 Nov 2009
I can't believe I missed three, "THREE", chapters. What a terrible reviewer I am. I'm so mad at Inuyasha I can't speak. He has the nerve to call Kikyo selfish. Please, he has been selfish in Kagome and his relationship the entire time. Now he has Kikyo back, could live a happy life, but he won't because he doesn't want Kagome to be with Sesshoumaru? Whatever. I hope that Kagome can change her offer to be with Inuyasha forever if she comes back. Is there a way to take it back? Really wonderful updates! Can't wait to read more!
I love this story so far! It's absolutely great! I love the character development! I can't wait to see the next chapter! Please update soon!
stars (Chapter 8) - Tue 10 Nov 2009
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