in the long run.... i can't wait for kagome to get back, b/c,... really i dont think she's going to be all that happy as an over all not with any of the 3 idiots causing so much trouble.
I love this story. I'm pretty sure I began reading it on ff or aff but I could be mistaken. Either way I'm glad that I'm still able to read it & enjoy it. I'm loving it & looking forward to more. I can't wait to read what happens next. I can not tell a lie though, I love a happy ending & I really dislike reading stories with sad endings. For me ,those types of stories ...the ones that are interesting,absorbing & engrossing,where each character is so developed that you feel with the characters themselves as they go through each challenge,discovery & experience & find yourself laughing,crying & getting angry along with them as you wait,impatiently, to find out what will happen next & to whom..............when they story ends & you are either left wondering what happened..did they end up together, or apart,are they happy, sad,angry or lost...or when the story ends with the characters you spent chapter after chapter after chapter so involved with that you almost feel you know them because while you read you felt you were so involved & engrossed in the story & the characters that you felt their feelings of happines,sadness, anger & fear along with them & then the story ends with the characters you are so caught up with either dead,suffering, in pain, hopeless, lost or alone & unsure what will happen. When stories end with the reader feeling confusion after feeling so involved in the story themselves (I think it's because when a story is so intense that you find yourself, as the reader, invested in the outcome of the story with a feeling of hope that everything will end well as if the story was something you were living through yourself,you want everything end well) or when a story ends with the characters (characters that you,as the reader,feel you know them so well & you feel as close to each one of them as if they were beings you know personally, even though you know the characters aren't real & it's only a story ) left either unfullfilled, with a sense of loss,suffering or fearing what is to happen next or how they will endure.When a story is so great that it causes the reader to feel &/or relate with it then it's as if the reader was living the experience & of course is wishing that all turns out well,good & happy. People don't generally want things to turn out bad or sad after an expereince in life .......................... & so, I think in that way I've come to not really enjoy endings that aren't happy.
Sorry if I went on & on I didn't expect to write something sooo long it just came spilling out & wouldn't stop. I had only meant to say that I more than just enjoy this story, I love it & can't wait to read more.
Thank you for sharing your gift of writing.This story is unique,exciting,interesting & the characters are so well developed & they show visible growth in their personas. It is my opinion that it takes a special gift to be able to write a story as amazing as this one & I appreciate the opportunity to read it & look forward to what comes next & anything else you write.
Respectfully yours-
Lara
loveyaa (Chapter 62) - Wed 01 Dec 2010
The ball has been rolling for a while but now its on the edge right about to be pushed off and then it will be unstoppable and on a decimating roll. One problem solved with Kagome and Sesshoumaru back together and no longer destroying reality. I also didn't know whether to be impressed or not with your explanation of time and distance and how Kagome could get out. I did like the way that she talked her way through it though. I also quite enjoyed the inner thoughts of The original inu general. Really looking forward to how things play out from here :)
Oh my Kagome... ;o;
You've sent me on such a emotional rollercoaster that I haven't felt that kind of thrill in a long time; not since Resmiranda's Tales from the House of the Moon. I cried at the end of her story, and I was very moved in this one.
Please, I pray and beg, update soon!
Happy holidays,
- Vou
Congratulations on your win! It is well deserved.
It's so sad that Sugimi won't be allowed to stay after the job is done, but I'm glad that Kagome and Sesshoumaru have finally come together. I hope she finds a way to quickly fix that time warp she's stuck in. I'm sure she and Sesshoumaru will be needed in the battle ahead. The whole cat and dog thing between Sugimi and Toran was funny. I hope Sugimi is able to bond with Inuyasha a bit more before he goes. Very nice chapter, especially after all the angst. Can't wait to see what you do next. ^_^
oh good update! I like that kagome's all snuggle bunny with Sess in his mind. her puppy♥ and that papa realizes that there's a price for the gift or living again, that he'll regret it once he's died again, but that he loves his hime enough to do it for her. ^_^ i also like that he's taking the time to get to know inuyasha, though i really kidna feel bad for Sosa. he's going to have one pissed off couple when they get out of this. i cant wait to see more!
oh good update! I like that kagome's all snuggle bunny with Sess in his mind. her puppy♥ and that papa realizes that there's a price for the gift or living again, that he'll regret it once he's died again, but that he loves his hime enough to do it for her. ^_^ i also like that he's taking the time to get to know inuyasha, though i really kidna feel bad for Sosa. he's going to have one pissed off couple when they get out of this. i cant wait to see more!
CONGRATS! I voted for this story and was rootin' for it the whole way. And, this last chapter just proved why this story won first place! To be able to incorporate the Theory of Relativity into a story as you did here with Kagome and her trap, just proves how intellligent and awesome you are. And, I love the fact that Inuyasha and his dad will get to spend time together and get to know each other. Can't wait for the battle to begin. I just hope Kagome and Sesshomaru make it back in time.
Keep up the great work! :D
TruGemini (Chapter 62) - Fri 26 Nov 2010
Hey Ber...couldn't login this time. Wanted to let you know that the anticipation for battle is killing me, but I am a patient one. Thanks for the update and Congrats on the wins!! You trule deserved them! I'm glad Kags was able to reach Sess and the whole cuddling thing was cute between the two. Loved it!
loveyaa (Chapter 61) - Sun 07 Nov 2010
And he's back!! I love that you throw something else into the mix. Now the battle can continue while Kagome tries to figure out how to unleash herself...and Sesshoumaru. I do quite enjoy that you keep things intersting (esp this far into the story) so kudos to you. I can't wait to see how the dynamic will change now that the all powerful and dangerous general is back so here's to next time :)
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