hey there! i just want to say that the beginning was really gripping and i hope to read more!  It was a nice change to read the story from sesshoumaru's pov regarding his feelings and such instead of kagome's (not that i dont like that).  There was one instance of word choice and that was with the word 'disillusioned.'  I thought you meant 'delusional' in that context to suggest that sesshoumaru was crazy for even thinking that Kagome should act like a dog.  Disillusioned means disappointed, and i didnt get that feeling from the text (unless i'm misinterpreting it...)

Other than that, if it's not a oneshot, i can't wait for the next chappie!! <3

ducky out.

Is/was she a willing mate?

This is some good stuff here :) I really, really think you should update :)

I like your writing style! *Hands you a cookie* :D

i know this was only a test of sorts, but i really like what you have done so far. I like how you represent Sesshoumaru's mind-frame and the fact that the characters don't fall in love after one chapter.lol.but its a really good start ^.~

This is really good, how'd she end up with him anyway? Can't wait for more!