Such amazing fics! Too bad they are abandoned! I enjoyed it a lot!

Hopefully you will find time and inspiration to update!

Thx!

wow so far its a good story keep up the good work and i say shippo first then whoever so kagome is afraid of hights anyways i hope to readmore soon

PLEASE!! CONTINUE I'M JUST EATING THIS UP. I LOVE IT.

That was great! PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON! I think that Shippo should appear next, then Kouga.

OMG!! Miroku left Eri at the ALTER!???!?? What a JERK. lol I like how Kagome asks him though.. All nice and happy and then I get the feeling that she got really mad at the end. ^_^ lol and I also like Kagome bringing Sesshoumaru lunch. :) I like this story ALOT! update soon

this is awesome! update soon!

Damn! im really excited to read more! Please update soon!

~CR~

Oh i love this! It's very different from anything else i've read, but i absolutely love it! Can't wait to see how the girls interact with the boys more, and where does Miroku fit into all of this if him and Sango are cousins? I really want to see how everyone  at Sesshomaru's office reacts to the other girls, and how Izayoi is going to react to them living with them now!

Please please update soon!!

Firstly, one eyesore for me throughout this first chapter was the name Tago. Are you perhaps thinking of Toga? Because I believe that is a very common name used for Sesshoumaru's father in fics now a days. Though if you really like the name Tago, I suppose that I cannoy begrudge you.

I was wary with the beginning, but I very much enjoyed the bulk of the story. I'm curious as to where you will take the plot. Thank you for sharing~

Definitely an interesting start. You've got a very unique premise for this fic. However, I wasn't really sure where this was set. I'm guessing it's an AU (as the Inu brothers' father is alive, and the two of them are living together), but I think a little bit of an introduction to the world as well as the characters would work in your favour. 

Take your time describing your world. If it is an AU, make the universe your own. Play with the politics, and the impact that having demons living in modern society would have. Are the demons living underground, in some kind of demon mafia, or out in the open (even running the world -- how would that effect things?). Half the fun of AU stories is exploring the cause and effect of changing the setting surrounding the characters, so have fun with it. The more you're enjoying the story you're writing, the more the readers will enjoy it too.

That said, you've got a very unique premise, and I'm very curious to see where you'll go with it. Creating an original premie is probably the hardest part of beginning any fanfic. Furthermore, your grasp of spelling and grammar seems to be very good, so I reckon you'll go far. 

Thanks for sharing!

Nefret

It's definitely interesting. One question, though: Is this set in modern day Tokyo, an alternative universe, or the feudal era? I like it so far. Can't wait to read more.