I think a little bit of smut only ever helped anyone! lol, wonderful chapter, as per always, im thinking. I love how she figured out how to use his own tricks against him, i as wondering when she'd figure it out. after this, have you thought of doing a sequel? thatd be very awsome, with a child maybe?
of course, it might not working with the ending you have planned, which is essential... so, i'll leave you to it! i hope the now last chapter is as wonderfully descriptive as this one, and that the epiloge is great as well!
~Kira
autumngold (Chapter 17) - Thu 10 Dec 2009
I think it would be only fair if Kagome was able to make Sesshoumaru beg in the next chapter. At least just a little. :) Love the update! Can't wait for more!
OK - I just spent all morning reading this story - I LOVE IT!
I can say without a doubt that this is my favorite Kag/Sess story EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You were simply brilliant with molding the perfect pair together - you kept them in their original character will bending them to your story in an act of sheer brilliance! Brava!
I cannot wait to read more! I am very much looking forward to your future musings!
Best Kag/Sess story EVER!
~Sandreline
I absolutely adore this work! It has everything: humor, action, romance, sex...and the teasing was fantastic! You have a talent for description. This has become one of my favorite pieces; I reread it every few days, and it always brings a smile to my face. Wonderful! /zen hugs/
Damn about time they got some action. Great chapter!
stars (Chapter 16) - Tue 24 Nov 2009
this was great. thaks
Very hot! I liked the description of Sesshoumaru after he locked the door and stalked her. Can't wait to see more ;)
That was hot!
Lilla (Chapter 16) - Tue 24 Nov 2009
Great practice, if I may say
:D
autumngold (Chapter 16) - Tue 24 Nov 2009
Don't you dare be critical of your love scenes. I think it was perfect. I like how you showed it was more than just sex, it was love. Thank you so much for the update. This is such a beautiful story! Can't wait for more!
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