Reviews for Deserving by Oroyukae

Goldie Fawn (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 Nov 2019

A wonderful one shot! :D Great realistic emotional stuff with some spice to it. Loved it! But now I'm hungry for brownies lol.


KEdakumi (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Aug 2011

What a great story!  Loved the way you built up their views of the relationships. And I will now need a cold shower for those 'certian' scenes. ;)


randomfan17 (Chapter 1) - Sun 26 Dec 2010

Wow, an emotionally drunk Sesshomaru with impetincy issues. His wifes a bitch and i wished he'd torn her in two once she started putting him down. But he's got Kagome now so i think he'll be just fine from now on. I loved this.


love you so much (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Jun 2010

Holy, hotness!~ That was epic!


Inumaru_Rapture (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 Nov 2009

Delicious.. yay!  You should make a sequel or epilogue or something... lol


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 1) - Sat 07 Nov 2009

Ooooo, just found this and SOOOOOOO glad I did!  It was very yummy and sweet, and just what I needed in between homework :D

Awesome!


Aimee Blue (Chapter 1) - Sun 04 Oct 2009

this was so sweet and lovely! Yay, i always knew Kagome could cure all ailments, i just didn't realize that the talent extended to bedroom activities...


ur fan! (Chapter 1) - Wed 12 Aug 2009
B-E-A-UTIFUL!!! I loved it! sexy too~ i love ur work!

ghost_youkai (Chapter 1) - Sun 09 Aug 2009
That was a beautiful story. Had me tearing up at the end.

Tana_san (Chapter 1) - Sat 08 Aug 2009
Wow to think that one woman can bring down the strong and powerful Sesshoumaru. But sadly it does happen in real life and you did an amazing job portraying Sessh as an abused husband. Abuse isn't always physical. The mind can do many things to affect the physical and that is one very sensitive areas for a man to accept is happening. Great job on a subject many do not wish to see our beloved Killing Perfection go through. JEN

TruGemini (Chapter 1) - Sat 08 Aug 2009
The mark of a true friend. They love you regardless and can cure your ailments. Loved the one-shot O. Keep up the awesome writing skills.

Noacat (Chapter 1) - Fri 07 Aug 2009

Wonderful! The thing that sticks out about this story is that it is in NO way your typical Kag/Sess. Every story I've ever read, it's always Kagome that's in the bad relationship. But you switched it around and it works SO well. Also, I love that you tackled erectile dysfunction. Sesshoumaru is always portrayed as such a virile character, it's nice to see him have a problem getting it up and it's equally nice to see Kagome being the one to help with that problem.

Also, Butterscotch Brownies FTW!

As a thank you for this story, here's my personal recipe for butterscotch brownies:

 

Preheat oven to 350?

Melt into a saucepan: 1/4 cup of butter -- stir until dissolved, slowly stir in 1 cup of brown sugar

Cool ingredients slightly then beat in:

1 egg

1tsp vanilla

A dash of nutmeg and cinnamon (no real measuring here, flavor to taste, baby.)

1/2 cup flour

1 tsp double acting baking powder (I use Clabber Girl, btw.)

1-1/2 cups of oatmeal

 Pour the mixture into 9x9 in. pan. Liberally sprinkle the top of the unbaked brownie-mix with cinnamon to taste. Bake for 20 to 25 minutes.


knifethrower (Chapter 1) - Fri 07 Aug 2009
Did I say I only liked long stories? I take it back. Write more one-shots! That was hot.

Sekiaku (Chapter 1) - Fri 07 Aug 2009
I loved that this time Shesshoumaru wasn't perfect and he had a flaw that I'm sure every man fears. I thought the way the whole story was written was great.

Inu Guardian (Chapter 1) - Fri 07 Aug 2009
The story was definitely original. I loved it. Aside from a few spelling errors, it was very enjoyable. Great job!!!

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