| Ohh, this is GOOD! Please more, more. I am enjoying this storyline. Continue..on.    
 
Jenna (Chapter 3) - Sun 09 Aug 2009 | Ahhh!! i love it!!! update soooon please!!
and i love the legnth of your chapters..
its perfect:]    
 
stars (Chapter 3) - Sun 09 Aug 2009 | please updata    
 | Love your long chapters.  I like your use of dialogue and flashbacks, it makes your writings style very colorful and makes the reader feel they are close to the action.  Keep up the good work!    
 | I love this type of Sess/Kag story, where Sess is a brutal businessman.  Your writing is very engaging, you really know how to draw a reader into your story, and make them care about the characters.  Excellent work, I can't wait for more!    
       
 
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