love it!!!!
NARAKU IS DEAD D.E.A.D YUP!
~*Dragon*~
OMG that was HOT!!!!!!!!!!
The chapters are awfully short and some of the details are lacking but it is very well written. I like it, and I know this came too late but when you develop more as a writer I would suggest you revamp it in the future.
Kudos to you, you have my respect.
I love this story. It was awesome. I have read it twice now and it was even better then the first time I read it. Thanks for a great story.
I love this story. Great job it was wonderful.
This is pretty good!
(Your style sort of reminds me of another author I like to read, which might be influencing my opinion, but this is a compliment.)
Will you be updating soon now that you're out of school?
(Aerospace Engineering? How cool! The lady who does this site is one too! What a coincidence...)
I like it. Just as an FYI; waste = garbage or loosing something (waste of time), waist is the section of your body above your hips. What's odd is you have it both ways in 1 sentence, at the end of the 3rd paragraph from the top.
I do like this story, however this last chapter seemed familiar to me, have you posted this before, or on a different site perhaps?
I really enjoyed this story!! It was really well written, and i can't wait to read the next time chapter!!
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