please tell me your not done with the story please oh please oh please 
      
Ariel Robbins (Chapter 1) - Sun 11 May 2008 
| It's a great start and it definitely makes me want to keep reading. There are some grammar/spelling errors, other than that its great.
       
| Sad beginning, but it pulled me in. Keep up the good work & please update soon:)
       
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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