Oh yeah about time...... It's gonna be a while until Kagome gives birth and then she has explaining to do.... I so loved that chapter and everything is still screwed up... Well getting ahead of myself again.... don't want to spoil it for the others. Update soon....
This was a good chapter, she should definitely come 'clean" so to speak with inuyasha. It's not fair to either of them, clearly sesshomaru loves her, and she has some type of love for him as well. But yeah, time to let the truth out Kagome.
Tai (Chapter 59) - Fri 09 Jun 2023
I really enjoyed this chapter. There seems to be subtle and good progress :)
D (Chapter 59) - Fri 09 Jun 2023
There is something poetically beautiful about this chapter. The way he spoke to her just was something magical and not quite right in the best way possible. And her utter shame but desire for him gold. I was frustrated with her for a long time but the last two chapters give me something to l9ve about her again. It's like she finally broke and she's coming to the realization this is what she needs. Idk some was just amazing about the last two chapters. Aslways the smut was top tier
Honeyue (Chapter 59) - Wed 07 Jun 2023
How long is she going to drag this out?How long can anyone? Great chapter but she's sounding more and more selfish and insane!
Oh we are getting closer I can't wait...
Kathy (Chapter 58) - Thu 25 May 2023
He's so in love with her. And she just like w.e.
Drowning in herself, it does happen and the need to be free and knowing it was you along that you hadn't changed is relief in its self. Great chapter.
Azuraskye21 (Chapter 57) - Sun 21 May 2023
Wow... what the heck are you doing kagome?! Poor Sesshomaru...
Well...as always, great sex and chemistry with the emotional/mental/physical build up. The lead in, the build up, and climaxes are phenomenal and very inspirational. Feeling repeatitive even though each erotic and sexual scenerio brings us a new kink or scenerio. Kagome is getting annoying...however, perhaps this is te mentally challenging and evolving relationship between K&S, but it feels like it's been going on for awhile. The complexities of the mindset of being married even though it's the Feudal Era. Inuyaha is clueless and posessive. Sesshoumaru is clueless but determined. I know it's part of the story telling process and clearly the preganancy build up as we move along the storyline takes time and momentum, so I'm in for the long haul. Love to hate this story and hate to love. I have so many conflicting emotions when reading and in the long run thats really a great thing to make the reader have so many raging thoughts and emotions. I am compelled to keep reading because of the characterizations. All the feels if that is what you are going for. Excellent lemons and insights on that erotic, beastial, carnal side of human vs. youkai.
Honeyque (Chapter 57) - Thu 18 May 2023
How long can she keep this up! This is the most pitiful I have ever read about her and Sesshoumaru. Great story, however hopefully something gives soon.
Kathy (Chapter 57) - Thu 18 May 2023
I love this. I don't know why she just doesn't end it. Like it's not fair to any of them.
Oh so good, still feel bad for Sesshomaru even more when the pup comes... Oh and Inu Yasha fleeing like he did shows how much of a coward he is.... Only to return saying “You’ve finally cooled off, huh?” man I'd slap him one if I were Kagome what an ass...
Kathy (Chapter 56) - Sat 13 May 2023
I read your story on both platforms. And it's still not enough
cristinPacheco8 (Chapter 55) - Thu 04 May 2023
Que cansancio siempre lo mismo Inuyasha se va Sesshomaru se queda y hay el tira y afloja se está poniendo un poco pesada haber si pasa algo mas interesante
Nooch (Chapter 55) - Thu 04 May 2023
I knew she wasn't going to be able to hold out much longer
but in the hut im scaried for them now bc the scent...
this story got me in a choke hold lol
I can't remember where Inu Yasha went because he was scared to have sex with Kagome thinking he'd hurt the baby. Now he's been gone over a day and Sesshomaru knows Kagome is in need but won't help her in that department until she tells him what she wants or needs... I can't believe she is an idiot.... lol anyway great chapter.
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