This is such an interesting take and you expertly weave the tale! Love it. Would love to read more!
So, I really did enjoy reading this. It's a very unique take on things, and seeing that vulnerability in Sesshomaru is kind of nice for a change. I would have never pegged him as claustrophobic, but it does make sense. And yes, I can definitely see him hiding how Kagome makes him feel. I like that she was able to fall asleep in his.presence and omg: his sittting pose!!!! omg!!!! I loved seeing that description.
Also, I did like the open ended ending and look forward to seeing more. if you have more to share!. also, pardon typos: writing this on my phone.
Julie (Chapter 1) - Sat 10 Jul 2021
This is soooo good. I love it. You totally capture Sess
Daisy (Chapter 1) - Sat 10 Jul 2021
Wow!! One chapter in and I love this story already!! I can definitely feel the chemistry between them and love that you made sesshomaru claustrophobic with kagome to calm him down. I love that it stresses him out so much that he transforms, showing how much he really is tense. Can't wait for the next update!!
Neelixonee (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Jul 2021
Absolutely love this! This could easily stand as a one shot, but I certainly hope it doesn't. I'd love to see his issues explored and remedied with her help.
Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Jul 2021
I love this story. There are so many nuanced details that reminiscent of the past but could be hints for the future. I am so happy that this is not a one-shot!
Oh that was good loved it. Giving Sesshomaru a phobe was a surprise as well. Why does'nt Sesshomaru just make Kagome his personal assistant? It would work well I think. LOL great job, this was too funny at the end.
Dongbaek (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Jul 2021
This was a very enjoyable read! I feel like you captured both Kagome and Sessoumaru's character s very well. I do look forward to more! Please keep up the good work!
Jasmine (Chapter 1) - Tue 06 Jul 2021
I'm happy this is only Part 1! I was about to beg for more! That was great!
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