You made me giddy at 2 am! I really enjoyed An Unexpected Love Story and look forward to seeing how this one develops. Thank you!

Why im so sad....dont make kagome die young please.....at least make her die old with many-many childs

Aww, this chapter just broke my heart. But at least they agreed to try to have children. I think that will be good for Sesshomaru to have something to live for after Kagome passes, which hopefully won't be anytime soon.

I'm hooked. I enjoy your style of writing, it's succinct and doesn't mince words. It does have a sad connotation that feels heavy, melancholy. I'm curious to see what's in store for these two family-wise and if Kagome can bear growing old while Sesshomaru stays forever young. Please update soon! 

A good start. I loved the prior story and look forward to seeing what you have planned.

I liked An Unexpected Love Story, so I'm excited to read this sequel. This first part was pretty angsty. Can't wait to see where this goes and if the two of them will have children.