It seems that the next chapter will be entertaining, I really liked the story, I hope you keep climbing more.
Oh my.... How in the world is kagome going to survive this? Why isn't sesshomaru affected when naraku clearly said " its for inuyasha and kikyou"? Perhaps its not strong enough because it was made for inuyasha. If sesshomaru leaves kagome, what will happen?
Story wise this plot is one that I like. I love how sesshomaru is very true to character and has no hidden desires or questions beyond the norm. The chapters are written well. I also like how kagome is on the brink of making a clean break from inuyasha.