oh snap! things just got hella interesting! i gasped when she gasped when he kissed near the bottom of her skirt ????
who is daichi? and i wonder if the reason why sesshou is researching sex & infertility has something to do with his parents divorce... hmm, only one way to find out! this is a solid chapter, thanks for sharing dude!
It's been a long time since I reviewed any stories and I just had to say my piece on this one.
I love it so far and I love how you are building the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome. Is this a demon-human story?
I also love Sesshomaru's coy and playfullness with Kagome and she being pretty much skitish and a bit sassy herself. It seems like her main hang up would be 'what would the rest of the family think of her having other feelings for him instead of just a sister/brother thing.'
My favorite kind of genre with these two are the semi-serious romantic comedy type.
They are just so right for each other. I wish someone would make a good live action movie of these two and the rest of the characters just for us adults. The author and screenplay would have to take these seriously and not try to make into a mockery.
Anyway, I love your writing skills and looking forward to more chapters. Are you planning on making this story a long or short one?
Keep up it coming and as often as you can. :)
Excellent job!!!
So cute! I'm really enjoying the way you're playing with Kagome. She's brave one minute and a scaredy cat the next, and somehow she just can't stop thinking about those suggestions... I love it! I really look forward to seeing where you take this!
Kousei
