I like the way you write the strory...make me want to read it until finish...is there any epilog?
(i forgot what is the name of the ending story)
Alison (Chapter 9) - Mon 13 May 2019
so happy but is this the end
The end seems a little incomplete.
Ahahahaha ok I am appeased. Still feel bad for the hand delt though. But I was right, this is good
SERIOUSLY! Ok I've now started to read quickly through this because its a little frustrating. How on earth, nope there's no way anyone wpuld or could hold sessh. And hos father is dumb as f. Urgghh
Ok I know I said Im not team sessh but I do feel for him too. I feel for all of them. Fate, (the writer) dealt them a bad had ????. Im really into this story, like seriously
You can tell It'sIm very into this story. It's a little weird how Sara is painted to be someone bad for wanting some comforts during her pregnancy. Her first and second nights with him were so horrid! How is any of that her fault. She had no experience. Kagome did and by no means woild I ever slut shame but she knew what she was doing. I get that innocence can be viewed differently but Sara seems innocent as well. She was raised a certain way and was probably told things about how special she was etc. Sessh was probably her fantasy at that point. There's hardly anything wrong with asking for some clothes that fit and pillows. Sessh is on some shit ????. I do like the sexual empowerment Kagome is given though. Too many stories do try to paint this innocent virgin thing. It's refreshing to see. I know it sounds contradictory to what I said about Sara. But the way I see it virgin or no virgin Im on both sides. Im not on team Sessh at the moment
Well damn! This is such a tricky situation. Both of them, at the same time? The Goat might be wrong, I hope. And Sessh is probably right since he sensed nothing.
If only sje knew indeed. This is a good story.
ashley (Chapter 9) - Fri 26 Apr 2019
I wish we had an extra chapter for the smitten but overall the story is well written and time!!! I hope you will write more stories I truly love ur work.
Saeko (Chapter 9) - Fri 26 Apr 2019
So well written!! I only saw one typo.
Love the story idea. Haven't seen any like this before. Can't wait to see more!
Such a fun story. I love it!
please update it as soon as possible
Kimmy (Chapter 9) - Sun 21 Apr 2019
Loved the store please do a epilogue I would love to see how their lives would change and how Sesshomaru reacts with the preg since he knows it’s Kagome.
this was really cute!
cant wait for the conclusioon this is a great story i loved it!!!!!!
I enjoyed this storyline very much!!!
I LOVED this can not wait for you to do another. I love how you portrayed the characters the whole story was just great to me can't wait for the next one
Sally (Chapter 7) - Sat 13 Apr 2019
Poor Genkai, it's not his fault his dad doesn't like his mom but she seems to be taking it out on him. I'm not sure how she was before her marriage but I almost feel sorry for her. Almost, lost most of my sympathy when she stated murdering servents and attacked Maru.
Lauren (Chapter 9) - Fri 12 Apr 2019
Wait. Sara isn't dead, but they just left her laying, extra-crispy, on the arena floor? She should be arrested or placed in the dungeon, or is she too damaged to even try to attack?
Wow, that was quick. LOL what a jump. I'm assuming you'll be wrapping this story up in the next couple of chapters now that they're official and have another on the way.
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