this was a very good one shot. i think i would like a little more from this. no pressure, but if you come up with more for this fan fiction please add on to it. i think it would become a great chapter story to read. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

More chapters please

This was an awesome and intriguing one shot.  A bittersweet little story that made me wanting more.

It is like a beginning to the end of a nightmare for Sesshomaru and Kagome.

It seems like you have issued a challenge for anyone to pick up the mantle and run with it.  I wish that I were a writer with imagination because I would definitely try to write a decent story from your plot idea.  I look forward to reading a story from one of the many talented writers on this site that may choose to give it a shot.  Since it's your baby, maybe you will continue the story one day.  lol  :)

Excellent job!!!

Hello,

first of all I think it is an awesome idea to let people write the actual story to your one shot.

You did a good job with this one. And because of the fact that you let the story begin in medias res,  without an epilog or explanation, right to the beating, it captured my interest immediately.

The story is heartbreaking. That Sessoumaru and Kagome are not allowed to live their love because of their species is more than unfair. So let's say that I'm not so sad about Sara's death. ;)

I really hope that someone is going to use your idea. Because I believe that this story has much potential! Maybe you are coming back yourself to finish it one day.

What a brillant story. I would like to see it continue. Especially a backstory leading up to how they both met.