Wonderful 

This is a very well written one-shot! I enjoyed it immensely and absolutely adore the way you portrayed the characters. Love the plot - so mean hahaha.

Great job!

Nicely done. First person can easily go left if the flow isn't just right but this felt natural. 

Sweet story!

I love it! Good job!

I may be mistaken, but haven't you been here a while? I read this story here a while back. 

An enjoyment to read. The first person was well done.

I like your story. It was written well and the lemon scene, in the end, was good. Oh, but instead of "penis," "manhood" might have been a better fit for Kagome's use in that particular sentence. 

I enjoyed reading this one shot.  It was very nicely written.

It felt some what rushed and pretty much like a fairytale as I supposed as some fairytales go but I liked it just the same.

The lemon scene I thought, was nicely done and a bit erotic.

It ended too soon...wishing that there was more to come but it ended as a 'happily ever after' and that was nice. :)

Great job!!!

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