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That was so beautiful and hard. I felt this chapter. Well done!
No words can really say how wonderful this chapter is... loved it.
I'm not a big Kikyo fan but she sure belongs with Inuyasha. I'm glad Kagome pulled off his beads.
Great start. Leaves me wanting more.
More, please?
I love your story ! I stayed up all night reading it after I found it. I hope to read a new chapter soon thank you for all you hard work I have been struggling with depression and my escape is reading it nice when I can do that with a story so well thought out.
Good chapter.
Nice chapter.
Happy New Year!
Great story.
Oh my that was an awesome chapter loved it.... I still think Kagome was being stupid in leaving the protection of the barrier she was just asking to get kidnapped.... Well hopefully things turn out well....
Great so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.
I really enjoy this story and you convey the characters quite well!
Hope for more updates
You’ e Done such a good job of generating the feelings o anxiety and tread that you will have to update soon to relieve all your readers:-)
This is a reaaaaaaly great story, and I can’t wait to see what happens with it!!! I really hope that Kagome lets Sesshoumaru love her without too much of a fight!! If you’re in need of a beta I’d be more than willing to lend a hand.
I enjoyed reading this fic. I had read it before but I can't really remember at which chapter it stopped at. I do remember reading it up to the tourney scene and that Kagome had won but I'm not sure if I read up to their love scene.
Anyway, this is very well written, there are a few spelling/grammatical errors here and there throughout the chapters but it did not detract from the flow of the story.
I like that Kagome is not the meek and fragile little girl in this story, ergo, I like the strong female you have portrayed her as instead.
It seems like you made a few changes to this re-posted version of the story. I read the one chapter you posted over on FF (if that is you) and it's staus was listed as complete, anyway, that one was left with an interesting cliffhanger. I did like that version but this one is way much better, this fic has more detail.
I read one of your short one-shots over there -"Plans" and I must say you are wicked...LOL :)
I hope you complete this story...I am excitedly waiting for future updates as RL will allow you.
Excellent writing!!!
Cheers!!!
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