Okay, short, but im wonderinv what happned, can kind of guess part but what about the rest.

A nicely written start to what seems to be a good story. I look forward to reading more and frequent updates if RL allows you to. I am anxious ro learn how Kagome found herself in that predicament to begin with. Great job!!!

I like it! A good read. Hopefully you'll update soon since it really caught my attention!  Thx for posting!