Not bad dear.  I rather enjoyed it.  I'm sorry that i wasn't able to get back to you earlier, didn't realize my phone needed to be charged.  Anyway, I really did enjoy this chapter.  You really did do a good job on it.  :) 
      
nicole (Chapter 3) -  Fri 14 Jul 2017 
Where was kikyo to save inuyasha 
      
Haven (Chapter 4) -  Fri 14 Jul 2017 
What about a darker fanfic with Sesshomaru and Kagome.  I can suggest Monster by Skillet 
or if you don't wanna do a dark one, what about My life Would Suck Without You by Kelly Clarkson  
      
Toni (Chapter 2) -  Mon 10 Jul 2017 
better than the first chapter   glad you kept it going   looking forward to more 
      
Mona (Chapter 2) -  Sun 09 Jul 2017 
She seems really dense in this fic. 
      
Suggestion: Dangerous Mind by Within Temptation (I am pretty sure that's the song title.) 
  
-Grins- I rather liked this one... 
      
Itoe (Chapter 1) -  Sun 09 Jul 2017 
Hello :) 
  
This is really a nice story. I really enjoyed it. And you know... I love Dark Sesshomaru Stories. 
Seeing as the Sesshomaru in your story is (somewhat) a dark one, I would have expected a bit more detailed lemon. Don't ask me why. :D    but I missed it here. 
I wouldn't mind another chapter. ^-^ 
  
Cheers 
      
Toni (Chapter 1) -  Sun 09 Jul 2017 
sorry that this is only a one shot  really enjoyed it 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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