I liked this, but it was kinda hard to follow.. The flahsbacks and POV change were almost impossible to read. It was a good, I enjoyed it.  
      
Sayuri (Chapter 1) -  Wed 14 Jun 2017 
Cute!! :D 
      
Zeelian (Chapter 1) -  Mon 12 Jun 2017 
Might want to mention in the description that it's at least in part a crossover... 
      
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