this was lovely!

i really enjoyed the flow of the writing, and the hint of mystery made it all the more interesting to read :)

I like this tale. A snapshot of many tales. I'm glad you found the inspiration to write it. 

Loved your story. It's like she saved him without knowing or trying and he took her from a life she hated. Fate really does work in mysterious ways.

Wow! This has me on edge wanting to know what he saw and will Kagome act on it!. I hope you will continue this story and update soon.