I am excited to see where this story goes next. It is much different than anything I have read before. I have been on Sessh and Kag kick since 2008 (still going strong). I only recently joined so I can leave comments. I am waiting patiently to see if you will continue. Either way, I enjoyed your writing.
What an awesome chapter! The cliffhanger ending is killing me!
O_O Jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!
Best wishes to you and your famil. I encourage you to finish your story as much as you wish.
Interesting
“We will have to seal her powers completely because of the jewel, Aka.”
I read it as also known as, and got really confused. Then I realized her name was Aka, and I felt like a fool. Great story by the way.
OMG OMG OMG!!! *.* I didn't expect that!!!! Moooreeee!!!! *.*
This is a very intriguing story. It is nicely written with an error or two here and there but nothing major to deter from the story.
It is interesting that Kagome can remember things from her early childhood. I know some people say that kids usually cannot remember anything when they are babies or little toddlers but I myself can remember a few things from my early childhood very vividley. So I find it believable besides she being a youkai it may be even a little enhanced but she is different to begin with.
I think Kagome needs to be unsealed because that may be the cause for her dying. Her body cannot heal itself. I wonder what kind of youkai will you make her...inuyoukai...lol. I think the kami is involved with her in some kind of way because where else would that thunder strike come from on a clear day to activate the well long enough for her to get back to her time.
Looking forward to future chapters so update soon. Great job!!!
A very curious and interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing how the story develops!
Molto bella
This is very interesting! I'd love to see what happens next :D
please continue I like your story
Very interesting continue. Love to see where you take this.
Ohh please continue!!! This is interesting and I really want to now whats happenning!
Whoa, now that is a shocker. I wonder what she has and how long she has. I hope there is some kind of miracle for her. I'm already on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next! Update soon!
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