I love that moment of vunerability at the end, I think we've all had that thought at one point or another and is really relatable... 
wonderful chapter, can't wait for more! 
      
LMFAO, oh Shippo... 
      
I wonder how she's going to go about getting Sesshoumaru to cooperate. :) Can't wait to read more! 
      
So glad that you started a new story! This seems like such an interesting plot, too. :) 
      
XD can't wait to read more. Already really interesting. 
      
This story sounds interesting so far! I look forward to an update. 
      
This story is intriuging, I can't wait to read more! 
      
I'm so happy you have a new story! I love your writing skills. Can't wait for the new ride! Great job ???? 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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