Even if you're not happy with this chapter, I am. The part where Kagome's friends so lovingly go off the deep end made me laugh till my sides hurt. Nice touch. Thank you for updating, I hope you get well soon.

It's such a mixer of all the very question that makes us puzzle for hour?!! I love this. It's very addicting!! I can't wait til you update!!

i love your story and i hope to see a new chapter very soon. until then i'll add you to y favorites and wait. :)

You deserve a million more reviews for this story and the piece before it. The chapters are short, but in a pleasing way. You use just enough detail to paint a beautiful scene without coming off as overly verbose. I was especially moved during the scene in which Kagome is talking to her teacher about the essay. The imagery there was incredible. Your characterizations of Sesshoumaru and Kagome are very interesting and in character. I loved the conversation in which he asked her why she doesn't fear him. Her response was priceless. I love angsty Kagome conversing with her parents. It's so typically teenager it made me laugh. The mood really suits the subject matter. It's subtle and almost bittersweet. Please update soon! There are not nearly enough well-written Kagome/Sesshoumaru fics out there!

I absolutely love your story. Honestly it's the best I've read. Well written, wonderful idea, and great character portrayal. And the quotes are a great add. You totally get brownie points!

This is an interesting follow up to the previous one-shot. The ideas presented can relate to a lot happening in RL, for one. Mostly, I really enjoy the characterizations and how you portray Kagome's confused need to be understood. His advice on how she needs to look after herself better in terms of not fighting the system, even if her ideals tell her the system is wrong, was eloquent.

Interesting intellectual debates each chapter.

I enjoyed what you did with Miroku. I find that I prefer the wise Miroku to the pervy, smacked around Miroku. Kudos.

FIIRST to review:) I would like to say that this is an interesting story so far, and i'm verry looking forward to see what's in store next. I think this is a very.. classy, artistic story. It's nice you're including poems/ quotes, that flow with the story and have a meaning (hopefully). I'm anticipating to see the development between Kagome and Sesshomaru! :) Update soon